Operation Daybreak

    Author: Bad_Name_9278
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. LordDragonMonarchRVz
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    "I win Mr. Baldy," Nate said in a smug manner.
  1. hilmice
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    Twirling his glass a bit Snape looked at him with a weird look on his face. "You wouldn't mind me being ..." he hesitated, putting his glass down," me being your father? You know that's what I'd be with a blood adoption. The potion would not eradicate anything from James Potter, it however would add certain things from me, making me your third parent. Biologically."
  1. AleX
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    Numba 2
  1. TimeAlter
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    It was then that Destiny began to break out into a full all out crying while hugging Origin's body. The strange thing was that she didn't burn Origin as she did with his armor.
  1. Caden_Allen
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  1. SPPrincess
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    When I’m reading I wish to have more chapters
  1. Katanexy
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    Well, this story is rich, if anything. The female lead especially. She's the thing that draws me into the story the most - her backstory in particular.I'd say it's perhaps a theme that the author will want to pursue the longer the story goes on, but I'm not sure. The terrifying disasters that come about as a result of parents being unable to handle the afflictions of their children is demonstrated pretty well in this story.With the FL and her obsession over this entity she calls Ree-ree causing her mother to almost go insane, mistaking it for depression, it gives a bit of a hint as to what caused the FL's Reincarnation.Speaking of Reincarnation, I'd say the story approaches it well in the first and second chapters, but I feel there's a bit of a disconnect with the reveal of the FL's backstory after that.I was intrigued with the introduction of the hairy wolf and the demon creature, but we cut to the FL's backstory instead which impacts the flow a bit.I have no doubt that there's significance in us seeing what the FLs life was like before she reincarnated though. I can't yet see the full vision behind the story.But so far, so great! I recommend this
  1. DaoisthiEB5MDQT
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    it so good 😊😊I hope to see more more chapter 😊😊

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