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The story is really good. The MC is an old monster that can't die who has already tried pretty much everything there is to do in life. In an attempt to change his undying fate, he opens a store that gives other people the chance to explore his own memories and rewrite history. Reads kinda like a mystery where the customers try to puzzle out their way through the memory instead of brute forcing it like the MC. Who knows, maybe both parties may learn something.
I very much like this one I really hope it gets picked up at some point in the future I would really like to continue the story plus I really like the authors of the work.
The beginning wasn't that great but after the story gets really interesting. I really liked how she didn't pretend to be a nice white lotuse type or an op get everything right Mary Sue type character. She's strong but not unbelievable strong and she's not the brightest but she's not a ditz either. Some of her ideas are kinda dumb but I don't really know how old she is so she could still be in middle school which would make sense for most of the characters here and the whole body hasn't developed thing. Overall I'm really enjoying it so far! Keep up the good work!
Hi! Author here.If you have anything to say about my work, critique it freely as that's what I'm looking for in my growth as an author. It will also be mirrored in Valor's adventure as he tries to obtain his dreams.
Good story but too bad it stopped adding more chapters, good plot and character building. Way too short and it was left at a good spot so I'm a little disappointed
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