ONE NIGHT THRILL WITH UNKNOWN BILLIONAIRE

**HONEST REVIEW FROM A REAL READER**Hey Everyone, Just thought I'd leave my review here now that I (as a reader) have read more than 143 chapters. I believe my review will be a lot more insightful than people who have only read it for 20 or so chapters.First of all**GENERAL OVERVIEW** TLDR [for those looking to skim]: This novel is quite like your MMORPG novels. However, for those who like this genre this novel ticks all the boxes. The main character is resourceful and knows how to use opportunities from past experience to create a good head-start. He has good values and is not forceful of his opinion on others and values relationships. The damage and stat numbers are also quite balanced and I must say the class structure towards an Alchemist is very interesting and is not what you expect from a typical alchemist with those skills that Ren (The MC) Has. *PROS* :* Character Development:Ren and the people around him all have a good backstory to them. They are all connected and the good thing is that there are chapters which does not just focus on Ren only where we are allowed to look into other people's perspectives and their own respective journeys.* Abilities and their UsageThe abilities that the author has come up with is definitely interesting. I would say they are the reason why I was hooked and continued to read. I really enjoy the abilities the author has created for Ren as they are very unique and have not been seen before. The way he uses the abilities are also quite planned out which adds more to the novel's flavor. *Side characters involvement and storiesThis is one of the best aspect of this novel: You get to understand the side characters who follow the MC that aren't just robots who are discarded later on once MC is oh so strong. They help out and their background is solid enough for you to expect them to be of help. *CONS* : * World Building [this one isn't too much of a con]So far it is not bad as the world of the novel is quite thoroughly explained and the back and forth between in real life and in game is interesting. It shows a good contrast BUT now even 143 chapters into the novel, the world building is not too clear and the direction for the future needs to be more fleshed out to create a higher sense of anticipation* Grammar and WritingThis one is slightly ick-y. There are quite a number of grammatical mistakes which affects the flow of the chapter. This is evident in most of the novels here on Webnovel. However, 'MMORPG Rebirth as an Alchemist' have more of these errors and I understand that the author is looking for an editor. It is not absolutely terrible and is to be honest decent but does create a jarring sensation.Depth and Gravity of the Challenges/Plot:This con has nothing to do with how Ren fights his enemies or how the author describes the fight scenes. They are all good from what I've read. What I mean with this con is that, there needs to be a linkage between what Ren does and what he's going to do. How well he utilizes his rewards to better himself or his future self. Furthermore, there is a lack of details towards a future goal or emphasis on what is to go from a certain point from X to Y. For example: (not a spoiler as this doesn't happen in the novel - just for examples sake)Ren kills a snake dungeon boss and receives a scepter of magic water that is superior to any weapon in the game. There needs to be an internal thought dilemma as to whether he utilizes it for himself, saves it for a future team partner, sells for money to help his family or himself, blueprint it, or use it as an extended quest line.What I am trying to say is deepen the plot with each plot that appears and show how they can link with each other and to be more detailed with certain events so that readers can expect the unexpected. Thank you <3 :D

What I can say about the book is that I thoroughly enjoyed it, with the fact that the MC's cheat actually wants him to be hardworking is really nice, compared to where others just have to use half the effort and they become heaven-defying. SPOILER( I think not a hundred percent set on it actually being a spoiler but read at your own discretion) The characters in the novel have their own distinct character points, an example is the MC's predecessor male childhood friend, though u would think he was scum for leaving his friends, the story has hinted for there to something more. And ppl don't lie that u most likely would have done the same if u had a certain goal that u were working towards.The translation quality is also well down, so I thoroughly enjoyed it. I hope this gets picked cuz the story intrigued me enough that I wanted to know what is next.

translation is so bad it's crazy. 1. the author is using a translator 2. author doesn't edit chapters before uploading 3. descriptions are long and meandering 4. mc is annoying and unlikable 5. mc is a transmigrator for no reason whatsoever 5. THERE'S ZERO ORIGINALITY.I'd give this 0 stars if I could. Only read this if you're desperate for trash, but I can promise you there are stories with similar premises that execute way bette.r

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I mean, this is the highest review I've given this site so yeah.I really like this story so far, the pacing is rather slow, but it really helps flesh out the world. There are so many stories where stuff is mentioned but never ever expanded upon, but here it all has a nice flow where each thing comes in phases and is never left in the dirt as the plot progresses. The characters are incredibly well written and you seem super connected with the readers and the stuff that you bring in is very realistic for this day and age, like the streaming system.Personally, for improvements I'd like, I'll be honest, I'm a sucker for love interests, so I'd like to see some of that. Another small complaint is the lore of the game. MC was introduced as a lore hunter, yet for most of the story we just have hunting, and grinding and then some plot and back to hunting. Don't get it twisted, as I really enjoy the fights, they feel well thought out, but they stretch on a bit too much sometimes. I'd like to see more interactions between him and the other characters, unless they aren't directly affecting the plot you had in mind, so do whatever. The conversations he has with people about the game or what he thinks of it always get cut short. He talks with Donovan in the car sometimes but there's no dialogue about what he thought about it, we just get a one liner before he's back to doing his stuff. Overall, the story's great. I really enjoy it and I hope to see it hitting the WebNovel charts soon! Thanks for the novel!

I like the concept and story so far . Hope there is more dungeon building though but maybe that happens later . Need words .........

MIlitary meets alien? YES PLEASE!!space exploration story is such a pleasure for mebc i really love space and all the mystery of vast starry skies. the story is quite fast paced bc only 26 chapter needed for author to make alien first appearanceand the author is the same person who write terror infinity. novel with good horror story about it.

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