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I gotta say this novel got me hooked..as a man of culture, i really appreciate this piece of gem. It has all kind of fantasy you ever dream of. The MC is caring for his disciple/lover is a plus for me. Some say this has NTR? No, totally wrong..i've read this from the beginning.
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Here's your worst review, good job. The mc with his 160 IQ somehow managed to be a retard. The saving the little girl was so fucking cliche you might as well make him actually be a prince, better yet why not her a princess too? The way you write situation is very annoying too. Here's an example of what it feels like: "MC could run five miles." "No, actually MC could run 10 miles if he wanted to". It always sound like you're contradicting yourself jesus christ, just write it as it is.
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If it wasn't bad enough our own building had caught on fire because everyone had left the house and choose to leave a 2 almost 3 year old in it. Could you blame me? By the time the fire department got done putting out the fire, they began talking to police about the incident. Then not soon afterwards my old friend from child protective services arrives at the seen. As if like a saving grace, she walks over to me and sees my crying face. It didn't take too long for them to piece it all together about who or what started the fire. "Well it's obvious to see that fire was caused by this hot comb station and lego but where were you all when this occurred?" asked the fire commissioner. No one had a response as they each looked around at each other. "I'm sorry but this is not a stable home for her to be in if she's going to be unsupervised. Just think of what could've happened if your neighbor hadn't broken down the door to save her in time!" The lady from child protective services added. "We will be taking her with us unless you have someone responsible to take care of her and her needs."
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