OBSIDIAN RIFT

glad to see this is finally updating again after so long hope the author doesn't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter also (it's been over a year man did something happen)

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Overall the story is interesting, mostly the characters for me. A nice character design, along with a good story. Though the world background has room for improvement. The grammar is also good enough too.✌

Very good

I liked the premise of multiple systems but the grammar couldn't get me past chapter 4. it's bad, even for this app.

"No, I mean, you see... actually, I met someone in front of the church. You saw it yourself, right? But I couldn't remember."

"Forget their number, we won't even be able to kill one! She managed to deflect my「Heaven's Piercer! 」as if it was child's play! We run!"

"Hello Gibson