Obsessive Devotion Ice-Cold Tycoon's Calculated Proposal

"No, thank you for giving me something to do. A warrior like me is bored in this peaceful world. My men will pack up and be out of your area in two days. For now, you are all excused."

Thanks for the chapter

"Shadow guard," he called.

Finally I obeyed her advice and ran from the horrid fight. Part of me wanted to help the queen. Another part of me knew it was useless. I went against Ferox already and he took me down easily. Trying to help Acacia now will only result in my death. I can't die today. I have to be smart. I have to protect my friends.

It's a cool place and they say it gets colder

You'll never know if you don't go (go!)

She had decided to take a look at her victim and the first thing that she laid her eyes on was the pieces of its hair that scattered around the thick mash of flesh and blood scattered around her. Mary saw its flattened piece of meat of what used to be its face before she saw its eyeball dropping on the floor.

"Just... Clean yourself up Snick. W-We can talk about this later. Okay?"

good book if you ask me..and I hope the author will update more often in the future

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