Its my first time writing a review, so here goes.The book really......doesn't have a definitive structure. I can't say its your typical xianxia, but I can say that its worse. Humour is really dry and the characters are just flat. This book was up against Nine Cauldrons which is much better than this, but still......this somehow won cause people do not know quality.
I have no real issues with the translation or stability of update; they're fairly standard. The issues I have are with the parts put in place by the original author. The MC is supposed to care deeply for his new family, but neglects them until he is forced to pay attention. The world has a impossibly large population given how frequently people die, and how small families are. Everyone up to chapter 73 is evil or a coward (or both) beyond a handful of people. Oh, and there is a lot of repetitive padding in the writing, definitely a "paid by the word" author.
Awesome work by the Author. The plot unfolds so smooth almost like velvet and the story has you on the edge of your seat with suspense. Keep writing, very good job.
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From an early viewpoint this is a very detailed story on the 1 soul, 2 bodies premise! Great integration of fantasy elements and tropes into the story, with very nice character design and development. The only thing I’m confused about is about what the author said near chapter 53 about them saying that premium chapters would only be integrated as side stories, which were optional. Did something change? All of the chapters after chapter 54 are premium.
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