"Kenapa jaket Sehun oppa ada padamu? Aaa.. kau pasti mau mencurinya. Sini berikan padaku!" Sunny mencoba mengambil alih jaket tersebut, tapi entah mengapa tangan Yoona tak juga menyerahkan jaket itu. "yak, lepas.."
I think this is done quite well for an aspiring author. It is obvious that he cares for the world that he's building. I believe the author is trying to create a more original piece of work that tries to separate itself from common archetypes. Overall, I am both rooting for the author and the world they are trying to create.
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