"Ummmm it's soon tasty" never thought I would say this but this food that looks like a poo is so delicious l eat everything in the table. Suddenly I got pail "I just realise how was that I knew where was the shower and the way to the dinner table"."excuse me master sorry to have disturbed you but are you fine!"."Wait why does she ask does she suspect me" No I am fine why do you ask!
Curious I played the video that has gone viral, mom on the side is also looking at my phone to see if I found anything. So I held my phone in between us that she can also see. It looks like a video lives streamed to FB on the phone and it shows a group of Media people was taking photos and video of the forest in the New York and the person taking the video was explaining thing he was streaming. Suddenly they were someone who shouted around drawing everyone's attention. So the video was focused on the person. The person has a terrified expression as his face as he was pointing at something. Seeing him the person streaming turned towards the forest to see what was happening.
WOW GREAT GO AHEAD 🥰 SO DEEP LOVE IS EXPRESSED IN STORY PLEASE GIVE CONTINUITY TO IT LOVE FROM USA 🇺🇸This story shows anchhi as unconditionally unconditional kind hearted ❤ and I hope next chapters would be more interesting 😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
The idea of the story is excellent and had me invested almost immediately.The plot moves a little fast, but that isn’t much of an issue.Writing quality is pretty good, very few mistakes.Overall, this is an excellent idea, but it’s execution needs refinement. I do not follow the logic for many of the actions the characters take, and plot holes are prevalent, especially in the early chapters.With a bit of rewriting and editing this could be a 5/5 story; keep it up author!
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