No Pera/No tension

Ahem, cough cough! Just read three chappies of the book, and think it definitely deserves a nice review. Sigh, not many things to criticize the book for, so let's start with praise. The books main character is quite interesting, comedic actions and profane, ahem! vocabulary, make a very good goblin. Not gonna talk much on the death of the protagonist, too comical to be dark. First three chapters were nice with good pacing, narrative and descriptive quality. Although some errors were spotted, those can be fixed easily. The author did a good job with the execution of this story, kudos.

Cassidy covered her sly smile with her sleeves as she walk out of her courtyard.

'I can't really remember.... but I have to make a good excuse'

'Is she perhaps a mute?' I thought.

With one hand stuck inside the ribcage and the other between our bodies I hiss in anger, kicking the air pointlessly.

They both jumped onto a nearby horsecart and started running across the rooftops. Ofcourse, it had some consequences, but they'd rather be eaten by a cow than clean the old sorcerer's hut again.

Tears were about to spill from my eyes as I was pulled to the plane, this time no other brother or sister of mine tried to approach and they all left me with a wide space and feared me a bit. Why? All I did was strike the monster that took everything from me, I am just sad I didn't have a weapon at hand.

Mau tidak mau, ardan harus memfasihkan bahasa inggris karena jadi bahasa dasar terran empire, dan selama tidak meninggalkan bumi dia tidak perlu mempelajari bahasa lainnya yang sangat banyak jumlahnya. Dengan fungsi otaknya sekarang itu adalah hal yang mustahil di lakukan.

Anyways, now equipped with the spear of that rascal, Loki proceeds towards the closest trash bin with a happy smile.

After Anko's dramatic entrance and her speech we moved out and i fixed my attention on the grass nin, whose body Orochimaru planned to take... I talked with my teammates in casual conversation as i felt Orochimaru take over the grass nin's body and kill the remaining two members by the time we had to move in front of the gate, as the signal was given Kabuto innocently put forward the idea that since we were sufficiently strong enough we should split up and search for scrolls individually. As we moved in different directions i made two reinforced shadow clones one to assist Naruto and his team in case some changes occur and other with the instructions to lock onto the chakra signature of Orochimaru and follow him for this day forward.

Shameless Author supporting his own work.This story combines everything I love: Cultivation, Fantastic Adventure, a Smart MC, Mythology, and most importantly, the Infinity Stones!It’s an epic tale that follows Lucian, a determined disciple from a destroyed sect, who inherits an Infinity Stone from his Master. From there, he embarks on a thrilling journey to find the rest of the legendary Infinity Stones, unlocking immense power, battling powerful enemies, and uncovering the secrets of the universe along the way.I plan to upload 2-3 chapters daily, with 3+ chapters if I’m given a feature. You can also expect mass releases when certain targets are met. Since I’m a full-time author, you can count on stable and consistent updates.This is one of the best books I’ve ever written, and I’m confident it will be one of the best on the platform.Not sure? Just dive in and see for yourself!

I would like to say. the story is good so far. I would recommend people to read it.