"Am I the first one to drop you comments like that? It's a compliment because I appreciate beauties." Ryu said smiling. He was pleased to see how Arya's face was flushed with his words.
Sorry buddy, it's going to be a long wait, after all what I wish for this novel is to bring out the wonders and darkness of dxd world. Not only the Canon.
After saying that, Randev couldn't say any more. He stared blankly outside the window deep in thought. If he hadn't rejected her for marriage, she would be alive and would be with him. He was filled with a feeling of disappointment. He murmured to himself "I've killed her, by not marrying her." Akira was listening to him. She was in loss of words. She opened her mouth to say some comforting words to him but nothing came out. She doesn't know how to console some one. She just stared at him, thinking what to say to him. At last she made her words clear in mind then said in a determined tone "You didn't kill her, you doesn't know her situation at home. Right? You shouldn't blame yourself for this."
I’m really impressed with how the world-building has been unfolding, along with the depth and complexity of the power system. The MC’s development has been fantastic, and I’m thoroughly enjoying each chapter.
Interesting storyline. Like how the characters are brought together. However, I am confused regarding Yukon’s gender as has been referred to as she/he/him/her interchangeably throughout the chapters.
A novel with a good potential, but the way of writing lacks. It's like some Japanese manga or anime nowadays where the MC is naive/has anger issues/no character development/full of awkwardly portrayal.These are the list that I see it lacks:1. Story development is not good. Too fast development. MC jumps from one scenario to the other that there are no breathing.2. The awkwardly interaction of characters. I read and some of the characters are like (I am a mysterious one) vibe.
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This novel is one of the best plots I have ever seen.Truly a masterpiece, one that is in a million.The author needs one bottle of bear for this awesome write-up.
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