It has an interesting premise with the mc being a deal with the devil type character. The cover art looks amazing as well. The only problem I had with it was the grammar making it a bit hard to read.
A very good book that has a lot of potential. However, the first three or four chapters have some visible grammatical mistakes. After that everything clears up. Really looking forward to more chapters!
More yuri is needed but I can see why the last chapter is called pity and regrets😢. Also where is the system? Anyways I wish there were more stories with succui?
Author here; thank you to everyone who’s supporting the work, I’ve been AFK for a long time but now I am back, and I will continue to upload daily, much as possible.
Rewriting a review - this chapter and the twist were huge. Every little detail and the build up were so thought out but unexpected enough I believe to have a massive effect. Nice nice nice.
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