Ok, since there are only 4 chapters currently... I can't say much, except the few grammar errors that I found which could easily be edited and the para-phrasing that could be improved... The story is just awesome! A await to see how the story goes in the later chapters!
Hello my name is Bella Smith (Isabella Smith). When i was younger my dream was to be a dancer, but reality is harsh and if you want to survive in this world you cant do what you love.
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