Mystica: Reincarnated Into A Novel As A Villain With 3x Reward System

love this story. a great hate to love romance book

First of all! I've read ton's of supernatural books and I can recognize  a good book of this genre and this is one of them! I loved it's synopsis because it's really exciting ! This is not a cliché story for sure and it's character introduction is also Great! I highly recommend this! Great job Author!

It really is questionable how something like this gets picked. The story is extremely rushed and full of cliches and based on the ratings (I know that ratings aren´t meant to be taken seriously here, but still) noone seems to like this novel. Trial reads are truly useless. The good ones get dropped while the bad ones get picked and eventually, they also get dropped because noone´s reading that garbage.0 / 5

My thinking is that this story will unfold beautifully around chapter 30 or so. I feel like the author is just building toward something great. Hope the best!

It's actually relatively good, as trial reads go. Be warned however: large portions of this novel will be nonsensical or unsuited to other parts of the novel. Examples include the nonsense that is his only attack skill, the fact that literally nothing he does costs any resource, his obsession with equipment over skills, the general lack of sense with stats, and the entire setup surrounding those stupid "death soldiers". This is not the author's fault, but rather the fault of the transcriber, who has changed major portions of this story and added random stuff in to pad out the differences in order to avoid copyright infringement while copy pasting almost literally everything else without regard to whether it makes sense to leave it that way. In the original story the MC actually does have an SSS talent which removes resource costs, is a mage who can fuse skills together, and doesn't even posess a system at all much less a horde of soldiers to murder his enemies for him. A lot of scenes will make much more sense if you keep in mind that the original author didn't have him as an invincible tank with an army.

The MC is crazy stupid. the book talks about revival chances and How supposedly he would never respawn after he ran out. Then he talks about how the price to buy one is high and then he runs out and uses all his money to buy powerups. Theres Lso a time where he gets ambushed by a gang and after he goes to hire a house maid and after is told the the maid he hired is a cyborg and after confronting the person deciedes to let her stay despite the fact the she could and is someone who is out to get him.

This limit thing is dumb, really makes spam be the more likely approach, anyway.The writing in itself is not bad, didn't see many mistakes if any, the rest is the problem, relationships turn from 0 to 100 real fast, a few hours change everything, didn't help to give depth to characters or make said relationships compelling.The Story is somewhat awkward, the development until the point I read didn't appeal to me and was kind of beaten down by how poorly I felt the relationships developed.The characters seem one dimensional, without depth and completely passive to the world around them, "Oh okay I accept being the support of thirty different people in a setting with real danger and with little to no real benefit besides getting a fiance that fell in love with me at first sight." c'mon, I know how plagued by such things the Isekai genre is, but generally, the typical protagonist is not given a choice he's just suddenly in another world and is screwed, this one made a choice, for me it was the wrong one.Finally, the world or worlds were simply not described, left entirely to the imagination of the reader, it'll already be a challenge in and of itself to make dozens of legitimately compelling worlds, not even bothering to describe them will not help.This story is clearly being written by a beginner author, so let me give a little advice, plan a little ahead, give time to your characters to develop themselves and their relationships, and invest in the world you are creating if you want people to like your story. You don't need to describe the texture of the pebble by the side of the road, but what I'd like to know is, how is the school, how do the characters look, do they have a uniform, does the clairvoyant old man have a huge beard, does the bro-con princess have amber eyes?

I like the way you describe the details  , I just started reading it but now it's in my library . so don't become lazy and keep updating  have a good day