listen I know you read the synopsis and thought 'hey this is pretty cool', but trust me this novel is a complete scam. its the usual Chinese novel where you have 99% filler chapters with 1% story progression. As a very experienced reader i can absolutely say this is utter trash and a waste of your time. most likely this wont get picked, and i hope to god it doesn't and allow other quality novels to get picked instead.
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Overall the story and writing is great, but I must say that there is no character development, it looks to me that the character is just stagnant and having fun with girls. I wont say that is bad, but at least add some more interesting events.
Genuinely love the story not alot of pokemon stories thats not about fighting hope it nvr drops ############################################################################################################
Hi there! Just here to give you some reviews :) Hope you don't take my review negatively if ever it creates an impact on you.To be honest, I like how you go through with your narration, its like written by an experienced writer (are you?). There are some minor issues with your grammar like in your first chapter,'A shrill insane voice screams from quite a distance away, but the horrifying effect of the voice does nothing to the hundred or so other poorly-dressed figures around him. 'the part ' A shrill insane voice screams...' you could just modify it a bit like, 'Insane-like shrills and screams..' to me it sounds really disturbing because you are putting too much adjectives just to describe, keeping it ****** and short is needed sometimes.'but the horrifying effect of the voice does nothing to the hundred or so other poorly-dressed figures around him.' ill try to edit this part because I cannot explain on what to do on this part.'but the voice that emitted a horrifying effect doesn't affect a hundred (or so) poorly-dressed figures surrounding him.'This is the only thing I could give as an example..I hope you wont take this as an offensive review :)P.S I love the idea you put in your story...
I am pretty much amazed as to how this novel is crafted. The FL is quiet and not presumptuous. Even if she was a top assassin in her previous life, she still acts her age and doesn't underestimate other people just because she has more experience. She is the quiet one beside her temperamental brother but her performance is outstanding. She is super low key. I am just a little down that I am already up to date and is itching to know more. Ahhh.. I just hope that there would be more updates.
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