Leaving a faithful review that might hurt some set of people (clearing throat, "The haters") ; I love this book so much, would have loved to read more but my wallet is growing webs.
Writing Quality: The writing quality is phenomenal. The punctuation, spelling, grammar, all are really good and well designed. Next to no errors on the pacing, tone, and adjectives are well written and spread throughout the novel to give a nice variety without scaring the reader off nor boring enough to cause you to lose interest.Updating Stability: Posts daily and each chapter is a nice read that draws you in and leaves you wanting more. Story Development: The background of our MC is ambiguous and mysterious. How he was transported to this world, why he was sent there, and how come he has the system are all a mystery at this time. The plot progresses fast enough that it the story isn’t stagnant but not too fast to the point where you are lost with what is going on. Character Design: You have a wide range of supporting cast to choose from and each are unique and they are believable. The characters seem real and you most certainly will find at least one relatable character which is an amazing feat.The MC is not overpowered to the point where he is invincible, but can be kinda dense at times and this makes him feel relatable. World Design: The world is still very much a mystery but it’s absolutely expansive and the author has an excellent skill with exposition that just draws you in and brings you into the story. Absolutely excellent novel and it well crafted and willing to bet with time it will become one of the best novels on the platform. Don’t sleep on this novel, add it to your library and you will not be disappointed!
I liked the premise but after reading 25 chapters, the novel is more of a vrmmo wuxia novel with too few actual "constable" work. Thus far, it has developed like the stereotypical wuxia novel with all the damsels-in-distress type stuff and I kinda just got bored of it.
I've read 36 free chapters , the story is quite original, I haven't seen any stories with a similar plot yet , I'm really waiting for the next chapters to appear , the story has a chance to become very popular I wish good luck to the author, besides the webnovel , is it possible to read the story somewhere else ?
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