The Heroines Want to Be My Mom!?

If there are negative stars I would have gladly given them but it restricted to 1 star.The story was somewhat okay but MC is absolute pathetic.

Realy realy boring!I quit after the first chapter and i finish it with great difficulty.I dont think to continue to read this novel, i like other style of writhing the story.

Good writing skills. It's really different content. Please keep it up and going on. We hope that you write another book also. I like this story.

I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）, then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.

Personally for me it is a near perfect novel. Reasons are 1. The smoothness of story progression2. Characters - very realistic and well thought3. Action scenes are nicely done4. There is a strong sense of purpose in whatever actions the protagonist and side characters performSPOILER BELOWFor the author - I understand why the three energies can’t mix and fuse but desmond being so overwhelmingly talented can’t he use mana as the primary energy, ki or aura for body strengthing and lastly arcanum for the mind/soul. Please think about it dear author, once again absolutely love your work🔥

It sounds good and has some potential, I hope the author doesn't abandon this novel.

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