I have read the full novel on raws - author just completed the novelDecent but nothing spectacular, too much plot armour and system power up.Good to read casually when there's nothing much to do, but otherwise not very engaging.Writing quality fairly standard, no obvious downsides. There were much more opportunities for the author to write deeper and expand on the world background as well as its characters as the current journey feels very 1D.The ending felt a little rushed but with a proper closure.
The beginning is really interesting and the world of the novel is unique, also the author clearly know where the story is going. Can't wait for new chapters.Keep up.
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Quite the thriller loved this story looking forward to wht will happened to the killer will the police catch him and get him treated in time or will he juat actually die there
"hello players, i am the artifact spirit for this system forged by the almighty and no the almighty is not god as some of you are thinking,but a being far surpersing your concept of God he is being who countless gods would go to war just for the chance to shine his shoes,anyway as some of the more intelligent of you may have guessed I brought you all here on his behest ,the reason being the almighty wants to see life prosper,grow and endless evolve in the chaos verse. the hope is for you to go beyond your limits and in order for this to happen you need to be tested both in spirit and in body.for some of you in terms of will and heart....okay now that that's out of the way ad like introduce you guys to some of the basics ..now due to the chaos verse being so huge, so huge infact you mortals can almost think of it as functionally infite, because of this the different life forms that exist cultivate or gain strength in four different ways mainly using immortal/devil arts,bio-forms,machines and of course every mortals fantasy magical arts.All these arts are more or less the same but the thing is immortal/devil arts have the greatest potential for growth but of course you have to chose carefully for although immortals have greater potential gaining strength as an immortal may take you billions of years or even trillions while at the same time the machine path may take significantly less time as all you need to do is upgrade your parts but the problem is your soul may be weaker so practically any immortal may easily kill you or even outlive you to death....haha hahaha haha did you see what I did there.......anyway"
The weapon hit the ground and created a crater in the concrete pavement. I ignored it and sidestepped the attack to decrease the distance. Using the Tiger Form of Chinese Kung Fu I opted to go for blunt force damage and landed a series of palm and claw strikes and then changed to Mantis, targeting the joints of his arms.
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