My Twelve Rune Maidens

One thing Is very clear about this novel. The author put a lot of work in it & did his research which is much appreciated. But 2 things I didn't like about this novel that caused me to ultimately drop it after 110 chapters.1. the story is too linear & there are rarely any twists. this makes the novel boring.2. the MC is a hypocrite & nothing special about him.

I like the story and how it's progressing but I've noticed on multiple occasions that it seems the author forgot about some stuff he put earlier in the story.For example: when he upgrades his class to "Jack of all trades" it said he gained all the abilities of the classes you can start as (cleric, necromancer, paladin, etc.), but later on in the story he's still buying some of the skills from those classes and not the upgraded versions.Ch 273 - the info section for "Versatile: Jack of all Trades"Ch 292 - cleric class: domain of tranquility Ch 303p - druid class: Shapeshifting skill

interesting background. dialogue could use some work. Characters are too innocent. Showing mercy once is fine, the second time they shouldn't leave unscathed.

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interesting story i will give it a try ❤️

"Oh ok. who.. who are you? where did you come from..?" I finally  thought it out. then the voice spoke again.

"I am sorry, but I had to wait, and I did, and now, we are safe."