My Three wives are perfectly ordinary

A very nice gamer book. Almost found myself in it while sleeping I thought I was one of them contractors.. Though some typo errors could be encounter, its the story itself that brought spices.. Its nothing more than an rpg,felt like the author is a maniac or just addicted to guns.. Just the overkilling and bruttality that makes me cringe sometimes.. Overall, good job!!

A review at 20 chapters.I posted a couple of comments in the first chapters about what the MC was even there for, figuring that he would just be a slave of the system. I'm really not a fan of that type of trope, so I was dreading reading another story where the MC is led around by the nose.Turns out I was half right, in that the MC isn't led around by the system, but by the situation and the customers he's helping. Which could be seen as a distinction without a difference. But it turns out it's not important at all.You see, the MC isn't really the MC. He's a side character, and that's fine. The system isn't the MC either, as it just facilitates what the MC needs to do. No, the real main character isn't a character at all, but the story itself. Or rather, the stories contained within the story.So far, in 20 chapters, there has been one completed story, and most of a second. The first was... heart wrenching. Good in its way, but the characters involved are really something else. There's anger, there's sadness, there's actual emotion that's pretty rare to find in these parts.But the second story, well, it's just... beautiful. A story of a noble heart and unwavering spirit that is truly touching.And where are the MC and the system in all this? They're just facilitating the stories being told. And that's just fine.

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Alur cerita menarik. Karakter dan monster juga banyak. Kualitas tulisan saja yang perlu diperbaiki. Tapi saya sangat mendukung karya anak bangsa. Ayo Indonesia!!

5 stars because of lord of mysteries vibe!///////////..............////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////.........................//////////////////////

THIS IS A CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK REVIEW AND DOES NOT PROBABLY RELATE TO THE CURRENT NOVEL'S TRUE RATINGThe novel was surprisingly good. If I were to say anything, you just need to reread your chapters more and put in commas at certain places. Only typo I noticed was you put ,., somewhere at the start I think. Noticed you aren't putting in commas before ands and buts a lot.Also for the story, its not realistic how he found the cube at that place. Countless people visit there every year, how was he the first to find and pick it up after (assuming its from ancient Greece) centuries have passed?Also I would change up your start. Its not interesting for readers to read flasbacks at the start of a book. This is why whe there are flash backs, its always way farther into the book or movie if its poplar.You should also consider a Prologue. This is how you grab people's attention, and interest. This is how they survive the first few chapters. I myself was not interested at the start, but I kept reading.Now I noticed two big plotholes of your story. One is he put countless death marks, but when you jumped into levels, he barely died that much, also he only marked at the start. Then its as if his flashback persnality disapeared and his whole personality changed. As I've read a lot of books and I am also an author, I can guess that the flashback isbfor way farther into the book, but guarantee 99% didnt think that much and just ignored it or thought the book was stupid and left.Second one are the stats, you made stat points really low, but whe MC gained stats rivaling the police officers, he was more macho and studd compared to them? Even more than that scrawny asian guy you said? Also try to describe emotions and five senses more, was bit bland reading. Try to describe things more, and add more relatable thing so its not 2D.Lastly I marked 3 for updates as long hiatus. I would've done two, but looking at your past record and past two days, nearly updated every day so bumped it up to 3. It would've hit four or above if not for that.

And in that moment ... when Naruto was about to undo his transformation and give a futile punch to Kaguya in her face...

Eu não gostei do nome que o mc tomou para si mesmo..