She also remember how the great General Stephen begging for mercy, before she could end the life of the general. Suddenly someone shot the general. Atleast he was already dead, but she still must find this assassin.
"Ho ho ho, dont worry he won't do that, and take it easy, you won't be crazy anymore. Because going crazy will be the thing you fear the most." The doctor immediately grinned at me, and I replied with a flat face.
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Id say the synopsis is hinting towards an unconventional story, I must say, I'm really looking forward to reading more chapters now. All im all I believe you should keep it up.
Came here cause this got recommended to me by a friend, and i can say it is not disappointing me.I am not really good at giving a review but I can say the book is great, plus it has a unique premises. To the point I have read it to, the other characters too are decent. Overall a nice read.
Like others have said the author includes WAY too many unnecessary details wasting time and basically reducing the length of each chapter in terms of actual things happening the random 'romance' also is just more annoying than anything it's not done in a nice way or a funny way most of the time it's just to be perverted for no other reason and this happens a LOT if there's any female or male character together there's a high chance it will happen which adds in a lot of basically filler also I've read quite a bit of this and maya's defining trait is... alcoholic and that's mostly it also explain why minor spoiler that two I believe rank c adventurers were teaching frost better than Maya was teaching him and Maya and frost also don't have any real chemistry and I mentioned it slightly before but the filler is heavily out of control and is seen in a lot of chapters overall it's not bad but it needs much more work and I hope I'll find it later on in the story
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