My Space-Time System

Ok overall. The author does not put himself in the seat of the reader so it's lead to a lot BUT a Lot of incomprehensions and make you feel that the Mc have lost a bit of his brain.

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Thirty(ish) chapters in. There are a few errors in the translating (missing words, or words that sound similiar but mean something completely different), but the background of the world is well developed. Not a lot of character development going on for the main though. He seems static currently, while the supporting characters are growing.

Are you planning to finish the novel....

Late teenage mc with the emotions of a small child and the attention span of a goldfish

The novel Is called space and time system but has nothing to do with space and time.

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Had to get very an honest review her and I have to say, this work has a lot of potential. Interesting storyline, a nice and MC and a lot more. Though I feel it could be better, for an original story it is already amazing.