Hi, Author here with a shameless 5 star review despite my story saying otherwise. The purpose of this is to clarify some things about this novel and its story to the viewers.
First, this book is not meant to be some amazing story with unique plot development or anything truly extraordinary.
If that was what you are looking for, then this isn't for you.
This isn't to say that I plan to write a copy and paste story with repeated clichés all over the place, but I won't go into this novel expecting an amazing story with plot developments and story arcs that have never been done before. This novel was always something I started writing to fill up my free time and also finally act on my passion for writing which brings me to my next point.
This is the first novel I have ever written. The quality is not going to be amazing and honestly, I am already extremely happy with the support I have gotten for this book so far as it was completely unexpected to me.
Now, to clarify the biggest doubts about the story, this is NOT A HAREM!!
Personally, I love harems... when they are done well that is. Unfortunately, I neither have the skill nor confidence to say I can write a good harem story with interesting characters and epic character growth and development between the MC and the female leads. The MC will interact with various women throughout the story but the story will not progress into a harem. If that was what you were looking for, this is not the novel for you.
Also, you may see some negative reviews and comments about the early chapters of my book and I am ashamed to admit that most of those reviews were true. However, after I finished the first volume, I went back and took the time to make corrections to the earlier chapters, making Lake appear less like a creep and the reaction between characters feel more realistic. Although I can’t say it completely fixed all of the problems with the early chapters as I was still deeply inexperienced when writing them, it helped to deal with the major ones. These changes did not affect the overall story in anyway so if your someone who has read ahead already, there is no need to go back and read these chapters.
Finally, like I said before, this is my first novel, so any feedback or flaws you may have spotted in my novel, whether they be grammatical errors or your personal opinion on the story is always appreciated. These things help to progress my writing skills and allow me to gain a completely new perspective on how to approach writing a story arc or chapter which all helps to improve the quality of my work.
If you still choose to stick around and continue to read this book after reading this review, I appreciate you taking the time to read this novel.
is roleplay permanent? pls yes, can he get another roleply? i hope yes because if not then just named this book fate master system, is this harem? i hope yes because.......... well, I love harem
Man. Wt f is this?? I feel like my logic dying. Not only is MC generic CN Mc, at some point I felt like this is just a great translation of a regular CN novel.
If you like this novel, either you are reading this while keeping your brain shut or you’re just too used to CN novels by now.
I mean, the way MC se Xually harassed a girl just in the first 5 chapters and the girl, instead of feeling creeped out and hitting MC back, she blushed. YES she f ing BLUSHES from Se Xual HARRASMENT!! And guess what, at one point I felt like not MC manipulates the fate any make everyone brain dead, he makes himself brain dead.
This makes me soo mad. Like where’s the laws? Where’s the logic? Why is everyone brainwashed and brain dead.
Would sell my first born to read this, great world building story telling and the plot twist with was just amasing 10/10 would force others to read at gunpoint
I like the concept of the story. And it has potential. But when the 'damsel in distress' scenario happens in chapter 4 itself, it's so disappointing. And the way the MC speaks to other women just irks me.
What I'm saying is, HAREM is fine. But it should be done tastefully otherwise just don't do it. When you bring a woman this soon into the story, it just ruins the future plot.
I must say this is an amazing novel some things here and there could be better(Example: Lake having to play the playboy character that his sister designed for him and him breaking things off with Evelyn. Even if you don't want her to be the female lead at least make them friends or something with no romance on both sides.). But overall, this is one of my favourite novels. Other than the upper points I mentions the characters,plot,system and world is amazing. I hope if you can take take my suggestion into consideration and PLEASEEE post more chapters.
Popular Reviews
First, this book is not meant to be some amazing story with unique plot development or anything truly extraordinary.
If that was what you are looking for, then this isn't for you.
This isn't to say that I plan to write a copy and paste story with repeated clichés all over the place, but I won't go into this novel expecting an amazing story with plot developments and story arcs that have never been done before. This novel was always something I started writing to fill up my free time and also finally act on my passion for writing which brings me to my next point.
This is the first novel I have ever written. The quality is not going to be amazing and honestly, I am already extremely happy with the support I have gotten for this book so far as it was completely unexpected to me.
Now, to clarify the biggest doubts about the story, this is NOT A HAREM!!
Personally, I love harems... when they are done well that is. Unfortunately, I neither have the skill nor confidence to say I can write a good harem story with interesting characters and epic character growth and development between the MC and the female leads. The MC will interact with various women throughout the story but the story will not progress into a harem. If that was what you were looking for, this is not the novel for you.
Also, you may see some negative reviews and comments about the early chapters of my book and I am ashamed to admit that most of those reviews were true. However, after I finished the first volume, I went back and took the time to make corrections to the earlier chapters, making Lake appear less like a creep and the reaction between characters feel more realistic. Although I can’t say it completely fixed all of the problems with the early chapters as I was still deeply inexperienced when writing them, it helped to deal with the major ones. These changes did not affect the overall story in anyway so if your someone who has read ahead already, there is no need to go back and read these chapters.
Finally, like I said before, this is my first novel, so any feedback or flaws you may have spotted in my novel, whether they be grammatical errors or your personal opinion on the story is always appreciated. These things help to progress my writing skills and allow me to gain a completely new perspective on how to approach writing a story arc or chapter which all helps to improve the quality of my work.
If you still choose to stick around and continue to read this book after reading this review, I appreciate you taking the time to read this novel.
If you like this novel, either you are reading this while keeping your brain shut or you’re just too used to CN novels by now.
I mean, the way MC se Xually harassed a girl just in the first 5 chapters and the girl, instead of feeling creeped out and hitting MC back, she blushed. YES she f ing BLUSHES from Se Xual HARRASMENT!! And guess what, at one point I felt like not MC manipulates the fate any make everyone brain dead, he makes himself brain dead.
This makes me soo mad. Like where’s the laws? Where’s the logic? Why is everyone brainwashed and brain dead.
What I'm saying is, HAREM is fine. But it should be done tastefully otherwise just don't do it. When you bring a woman this soon into the story, it just ruins the future plot.
Another novel with potential got ruined.
this novel is super good