This novel is poison, I wouldn't recommend people to read this. The grammar is extremely bad, half of the stuff happening in the novel doesn't even make sense. The mc is a retard who's got no IQ. Events randomly take place out of nowhere accompanied by haphazard time-skips. Poison testing this novel equates to "Death".
I cant understand the translation. Nothing matters if the translation is garbage. The expressions don't make sense, nothing makes sense. Those who stuck with it, I have to say super impressed.
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Once they reached the inn, Chiho parked their R37 in the side again and left it there. They carried their weapons inside the inn, The chains make noises as Ayumi walks, getting the attention of the people inside. "Welcome back.. Make sure to keep those weapons safe" As usual, Suzuka greets them. "Yeah, Sorry for these! We had to get them since we'll be doing training tomorrow.. We got these from Gentaro-san, by the way" Mariko used Gentaro's name to ease her up. Suzuka nodded on them and they proceeded to their room. Once they settled down for some rest, They laid on their beds. "Hey, Hey! How are you going to train us tomorrow?" Ayumi happily asked. "Oh.. Come to think of it.. You.. just kinda have to practice to throw your weapons.." Mariko looked at the ceiling. "Throw?" Ayumi asked. "I mean.. use them against enemies.. I'm not a good instructor.." Mariko scratched her head. "Well.. You're going to watch us use our weapons, then you tell us if we're doing it wrong so we can do better.." Chiho suggested. "Then! When we are used to them, I want you to a sparring with me!" Chiho happily continued. "Sparring, you said?! Hell yeah! Let's do it!" Mariko's excitement kind of scared the two a little bit. "J-Just be easy on us.. By the way, Have you killed someone?" Chiho curiously asked. "Yeah, tons of 'em.. Mostly bandits, those stupid fucks who doesn't live inside a village or a country.." Mariko answered. "I..I see.. Please go easy on us.." Chiho curled up on her bed. "Don't worry~! I know how to hold back!" Mariko eased them up. "Plus, If Ayumi-chan gets to used to throw the chained sickle, She will have a great advantage against me.. So do your best okay?" Despite Ayumi's size, Mariko still wanted her to learn to use the chained sickle, She patted her head. "Yes! I will!" Ayumi happily nodded.
After dividing all the chakra he used his chakra to push all other chakra except earth and water chakra throughout his body and changing his genes slowly.
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