The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
I enjoyed the first 60 chapters, but the author really dropped the ball afterwards.I’ve been reading the MTL (at around c.250) and its literally the same plot over and over.The MC sends out people to do some task and right before they can complete it they are overwhelmed by the enemy and the MC has to expand the territory to save them with his avatar.Rinse repeat. Nothing is ever accomplished by his subordinates without help from the MC who saves them every time. It’s literally all the plot ever is.MC is about to have enough experience to upgrade his territory? You know there will be some fight that happens right as he upgrades which coincidentally includes everyone within his territory so that he can save them.Also, the upgrading has essentially no effect on the novel other than adding another wall that isnt even used. No additional systems, no changes to the story.Utter disappointment of a novel.
Thanks for reading!I never intended to post Regency stories here when I started, but then there was a historical romance contest, so I posted the first one. And then... Just when I was requested to continue the story, up popped a contest for commoner consort! >:0And so here we are, and I'm posting two chapters a day, but this means the story will likely be completed shortly after the contest ends.The Marques Waverly was introduced in Kateri Leona, and I have been waffling back and forth over whether to maintain the original three light novels format or combine this one with the next one, in which the Marques moves from romantic interest to main character in his own right.Regarding the spelling of Marques, I chose it as the middle ground between Marquis and Marquess, and all three are pronounced Marky, making him Marky Mark :p (Ok, bad joke, I know.)
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