My Perfect World

The author and logic are like water and oil 1. Where did MC get shorts? 2. Where did MC get googles? 3. why can the girl get a point of vitality from casual relaxed swimming? 4. How on earth can a social person and an expert in prno don't recognize a bra?And this is only beginning.

Another story about a system and its useless host. It's tiring to see the same stories over and over again. I quit after 4 chapters because it was terrible.The writing quality is aweful. The author is too anxious to play with the system that we know next to nothing about the world but we can see the MC doing nothing and getting stronger, got a rare treasure and draw the attention of the school belle. I repeat I stopped after 4 chapters.The MC transmigrated and the host previous life was terrible. Parents abandoned him and he got no friends. Very convenient when you are an author who doesn't want to develop characters.

It has been 2 weeks since the last time a chapter was updated. Why have the chapter updates stopped? Did the novel go on hiatus? What happened? Someone tell me what is going on!

Pretty much a gem of a novel. EVERYTHING IS PERFECT. Whatver you think a villian would do is here with all those cute scenes. The one problem is the updates.. I read the 87th chapter 9 months ago and we are closing on the 107th chapter this month. This amazing novel should not be ruined like this. Its way better than thos face slapping mf cuz this is the real deal. Its a 4.2 from me.

The MC drifts from place to place falling into trap after trap like someone constantly slipping on banana peels. New plot lines keep opening up whilst old ones are left hanging. New questions continually pop up while previous questions go unanswered. MC was given the task to find the 5 pieces of the map from the first few chapters, after 500 chapters of not minding his own business he still hasn't found the 4th piece and decided to concentrate on revenge instead. Most of the setting (99%+) is wasted as the MC keeps going to new mysterious places and f*cking about while everyone he cares about gets murdered. You could say the author is just making sh*t up as he goes along. And you'd be right.The author's exact thoughts at the time of writing the MC:"How can I write someone to be as miserable and helpless as possible?"Here's the story in a nutshell:OMG I NEED TO FIND THE 5 PIECES OF THE MAP BEFORE THE OUTER SPACE DEMONS ARRIVEOh look here is a random village that I don't need to enter but I will do so for the lulzOh noes random people are getting chased by monsters I must protect them even though I've repeatedly said that I'm a selfish bastard but actually I'm a nice guySUDDENLY MONSTERS OUT OF f*ckING NOWHERE AND NOW I AM GETTING CHASED BY MONSTERS FOR 20 CHAPTERSWHAT! HOW DARE RANDOM STRANGERS THAT I DO NOT KNOW BETRAY ME! I AM VERY DISAPPOINTED! VERY SAD!!Oh look, a power struggle between random strangers. Must... not... get... involved [gets involved anyways][100 chapters later]Wow I just found about the existence of aliens maybe I should keep my book a secret[reveals he has the book to all the aliens]f*ck WHY ARE ALIENS CHASING ME[LITERALLY 400 chapters later]OMG I STILL HAVEN'T FOUND THE MAP BUT ALL MY FAMILY IS DEAD AND I DONT CARE ANYMORE! I HAVE TO KILL ALL THE ALIENS WHO KILLED MY FAMILY!![1000 chapters later the aliens are stronger than ever and he is still a weak shit]So the premise of the story is that the MC has a magical book that NOBODY knows exists because it's f*cking thousands of years old and everybody thinks it's a pile of junk. Also nobody could read it. Otherwise they would've taken it away from him already. The magical book contains magical spells and cultivation methods and deadly strong fighting techniques that can destroy entire armies with a single attack. The book tells the MC that the world will plunge into darkness in 2012 and a new age will begin that lets him use magic.Of course the MC is a blabbering idiot and tells everyone about 2012 by POSTING IT ON PUBLIC INTERNET FORUMS.The problem with this is that the MC states that he's incredibly selfish and cold and will place his own interests over other people's, and yet his actions show the exact opposite. Let's think about this. If it's true and NOBODY ELSE on the internet predicted the darkness then it means it's either:1. Top secret information that the government does not want anybody to knowor2. Information that even the government does not knowRegardless of whether if it's 1 or 2, the government as described in the story would obviously arrest and torture the MC and everyone who has ever had the misfortune of being in contact with him to find out how he came across the information. The MC's actions do not make any sense. Even Jesus reincarnate wouldn't go blabbering on about the darkness since NOBODY would believe it, and it would bring trouble to him later on because he would get arrested. Thus posting about it on the internet forums is the worst decision in every possible situation.There are a few more really dumb things that the MC does, like creating and wearing flashy looking armor that is instantly recognizable from miles away that NOBODY ELSE is wearing, using flashy fire and ice spells to kill bugs IN FRONT OF EVERYONE and so on. I'm actually surprised that the MC does not get found out by the aliens sooner.There are more shiit to this novel DON'T READ IT FOR THE SAKE OF YOUR SANITY JUST DON'T!!!!!!

Will might not understand the voice's issue with electronics, but the fact of the matter is cultivators and any other entities harnessing any kind of energy (except electrokinesis) hates electronics with a passion. For example, when QI (more than what is naturally present in the vicinity of the device) goes through the device they all short circuit or burst into flames, another reason worlds, planets, and realms with a lot of powerful cultivators lack technology, except when they discover on how to use QI crystals in place of mortal power sources, then find a way to use cultivation resources to make their own technology, not artifacts, something usable even towards people that cannot harness QI. Though, only cultivators can use cultivator technology to it's full potential, as it runs off of their energy directly.

Sorry for the wait. This chapter gave me a headache to write. Now I’m dead tired so I’ll go to sleep. Tomorrow I’ll re-read this chapter so as to find possible errors. And then, sorry again for the wait!

But this didn't affect the boy much.