Not a fan I'm sure plenty of people will like this but for me it's just a power fantasy he never struggles he always just gets stronger and stronger at the same time to start tries to make him seem like he's weaker than everybody so he's constantly sneak attacking people but in the end he's never struggled and I don't think he will this is just a super strong main character and if you like that that's for you and if you don't well then do like me I'm leaving
The book is NOT completed! Of that was the ending then it sure did NOT seam like one. The writing is not so great & needs editing as the flow is choppy.
so this book through chapter 29 has been ok, grammar is way off! then starting at chapter 30 the names all changed! dear author what the heck is going on??
looking forward more chapters everyday. the flow of the story is getting more interesting . I like Marshall's character, Hoping he will end up wth Stella.
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