My Lunar Wolf System

This story is good, however, i havent seen any reviews really criticizing anything, so ill have to do it myself.First, the author seems to enjoy wasting time rambling needlessly for chapters on end. A simple trimp from a village to the academy took like 20 chapters for no reason, it could have been handled within 5.Second, i noticed that he attempts to make the MC appear smart in the initial chapters but it just comes across as forced and makes the MC look dumber because his “smarts” are common sense lol (BUT because it was the initial chapters ima let that slide)Third, once again coming back to the authors rambling. Each action and even that take place do NOT need to be 5-10 chapters long lol, not ever event is that important and shouldnt be drawn out for the word count.Fourth, (just a pet peeve of mine) i feel that the MC is very naive for no reason. Like not in the normal sense of the word but hes very easily influenced?? If that makes sense. Like, he sees some man fly, and freaks out and starts “respecting him” (even though this dude literally met GOD 5 seconds ago) I dont know it is just weird, this kind of stuff happens a lot. (Anyways, loving the story so far author, hope you dont do anything so outrageous that i end up dropping, youd be suprised how many times that happens)

Well so far, it would be good if the author didn't increase the pace and just continue with some more trails or something similar. Looking forward to more.

I don’t like how the MC’s handling his problem, that’s it.......................................................................……….........

ambithita why do i want to kill the fl, reading this book makes me want to smash my head with a piece of tofu im gonna die of anger if i keep reading

it was quite fun, but past 60th chapter translation quality is comparable to the level of decent mtl and it drops. not worth paying for that.

I've been giving power stones for over a month now hoping maybe the author would continue writing this is a treasure in the making has a big potential to be one of the best sadly i guess it will be another amazing LN dropped i really hopr one day soon it would make a comeback i don't ask much just 1 chapter every 2-3 days is enough i will send however much stones i can just keep going

It's ok,no,no, Noyes to get a new one and it was a pleasure meeting you and your family are doing well and that you are not about that time and I will 🙏 just got home from work and I will be there.

Actual seems like a good read for now because we only got 21 chapters in so I'm not too sure but with what I've been seeing I say it'll be great