My Life as the Villainess’s Butler

Hello readers author here, if you guys have any suggestions for me to improve the novel please tell me so

I don’t usually leave reviews.. buttttIt’s a book from Lncea, and bro is underrated but his books are always gems on this app.Especially when it comes to writing villain characters, he definitely delivers. I have no doubt that this will be a good story, hopefully it blows up and becomes big

the writing quality is good, I haven't seen any noticeable grammatical error until now. the story holds potential with the mc's race which I shall not spoil and the different skills,  for the characters we are only introduced to the mc for now who is fairly intresting and we don't really know much of the wider world but what we have seen is intriguing., the author updates regularly so there's that.

"Ai,remember what I said? I'm willing to risk my heart." He is really persistent and he won't give this idea another time for thinking. Hesitantly I slowly nodded.

And all that glitters is gold

"Thank you," Koby said, once again pushing Jade from behind, leading them away from the man. "We appreciate your help sir." He moved faster, forcing Jade to speed up his pace.

I felt awkward for asking it like that but she anwered,

"Of course you are pretty! You are the most beautiful person that I know. With your body like that, even though you are wll covered, guys would line up just to talk to you."