I'm giving you a rating of 5 because I understand that you're a novice writer, but there really are a few small errors in logic that personally bother me a bit. At the outset of the novel, he refrains from distributing additional bread despite being a "benevolent individual by nature
You might love Mc, but my favorite is Baku.In my country Baku is spiritual monster, rumors say it exist, and there is proof.Anyways, I like the character design, and why is the system so cocky
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