Novel is interesting... An MC who good with plans & sticks with his fighting style... Villians with their own unique personaloties & reasons for their actions... The only time the flow of the novel suffered was when the author tried to be mysterious about Zeke when we knew it was him... We could guess how & whose body he used to comeback to life... Those few chapters took me over a month to read because it destroyed the flow of the novel... Just about to finish that part hopefully it gets good again...
The book definitely had potential. Interesting video game plot. The author may not have had as much experience playing as writing. Several time he used the wrong attributes for a primarily dexterity based class. Damage scaling based on strength when using a crossbow was particularly bad. What made me ultimately drop the book is when the MC tied up a female enemy, sexually assaulted her, and threatened to rape her. Seriously?! Sorry, I refuse to read a book with an evil MC. Standards matter. Morals matter. Hopefully I can check out your future work.
I had expected something good after author's last novel 'stealing heroine' one but this novel was a dissapointment i won't say anything about bad grammar but novel was full of lines trying to evoke a comedic atmosphere though it wasn't able to do it. and there are other things but i ain't gonna type anymore
its absolutely garbage. the MC is always underdog and is taken advantage of. retard mc is a pushover and the author is probably one too. Not interested in weak betas stories
The world in this story becomes more and more deep and interesting as it goes on. It draws you in from the beginning but keeps you reading. There are some slow chapters but it pays off hugely as the story develops. It's exciting and well-built. Also the characters aren't just pawns, they all seem to have their own motivations and are complex in their own right which makes their interactions all the more enticing. The clear critique is that there are slow chapters, but if all the chapters tried to be exciting without giving room for development, it may become less impactful when things pay off. So I'm fine with those chapters.
At last it's here.. 😘 I was looking forward to this novel from the time the voting started.. 😁.. Now I want daily updates, mass releases and all for this novel...
Event with the rush ending, its still a great story. Wish that a bit more romance added for the next story, so that it will be more wholesome world of story 😁thank you for creating this story for ur enjoyment😊
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