My Harem in Galactic Quest

such a great Story and so detailed. i really liked the way you wrote about the unterworld and i Look forward to read the next Storys!!

it was just so retarted the mistakes, and why the **** does fat = bullying? ive been fat all my life, never once been bullied, like what the ****, and ugly  doesnt = abused, like are you retarted or what, and what is with the main character not checking anything?

Extremely repetitive writing. Half of the paragraphs just reword previous paragraphs (e.g. "He was nervous because it was his first time." "Because it was his first time, he was anxious." and a handful of other rephrasings...some one right after the other).   Then the author uses A LOT of extra unnecessary descriptions for movement. It feels like he says, "He turned his body, lifted up his arm, extended his fist, and pointed at the object with his index finger," instead of just saying, "He pointed at the object." It feels like 50% of the chapters could be erased with zero clarity lost...in fact it would increase clarity.Characters are one dimensional and boring.Barely any MEANINGFUL world background or description. Especially bad since the author seems to randomly use four different ranking systems terms for monster strength with no rhyme nor reason (stage, level, star, and rank).

Author of the works History's Number 1 Founder And History's Strongest Senior Brother so you know this will be good. Really recommend it, hope it gets picked

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Short: A world where All of the European myths exist on the same era. There are Gods in the world. MC is transmigrated with a cheat into a 16 year old. He is the intellectual type. MC cheats is quite mysterious right now, But looks like it related to Godhood. 2 cultivation system right now, Fighter and Mage, MC learning Magic at a school. Extremely good Arc regarding the School. I really like it because unlike most of the novels this guy doesn’t have a plot armour, He has to do sh.it to get out of trouble. And not divine intervention, And this is a novel with Living GODS so that says a lot. You will love it More if you’re particularly interested in Myths.Long: World: There are tons of Gods/Demigods from Myths from the European And African continent currently in the world all at the same time. Because of it the all of the cultures are uniquely influenced and mixed. The current story revolves around the Ancient Greece. The MC is in Magic school. And it actually feels like a school rather than those usual school arc that are there just to power up MC’s basic. Cultivation: There are two types mentioned Fighters and mages, Mages are relatively new, So it hasn’t developed that much. The goal of it is to become Demigods as Mention of becoming a deity seems to be blasphemy.MC: MC is the intellectual type, He prefers to solve his problems using his head, And in quite unique ways. He doesn’t seem to have a great plot armour, No bs luck that will suddenly get him out of trouble. He uses his brain but doesn’t feel like an inhuman person.  There quite few side characters that are really good, And the Author seems to focus equally on both sides, Hope he doesn’t throw them away after MC powers up. Overall surprisingly it feels like nothing happened and so much happened at the same in this 40 chapters. The Concept with The MC and cheat might do wonders. The author seems to have researched a lot about thinking and self reflection. A lot of things you can reflect About. Anyway its a great read. 👍

<p>Adriana: ( cries ) my baby you finally said that i'm your mommy, I'm so glad. Let's celebrate by exploring the last room together, okay.</p>

But by now new skins were being released and shit.