Writing quality: Its terrible (1)Stability of Updates: Author seems to upload everyday so ok (5)Story development: Ye... just no (1)Character Design: average (3)World Background: Also average (2)score: 2.4Why does this have such high reviews?
Lol, I like how the author put in a disclaimer that he will make fun of dogs and cats.You can tell the humour is good from that alone, not to mention 'Luigi's Pizzaria'.Pfft. Imagine, a guy walks up to a mafiaso and shouts, "It's a me! Luigi!"Then jumps on his head and kills him. But here he doesn't eat the magic mushrooms (drugs) and prevents others from eating them.Great concept, great writing. Keep it up.
Si kakek itu tampak lelah dan bingung. Kakek itu lalu menghampiri lapak kami, ketika melihat piring dan sisa makanan yang telah kami makan diapun ingin mengambilnya. Ibu tidak mengusir kakek itu, dia hanya memgambil sisa makanan dan piring kotor kami. Ibu lalu mengganti piring itu dengan mangkuk yang masih bersih dan memberikan si kakek 1 bungkus bubur ayam yang masih baru dan belum tersentuh untuk, dimakan oleh si kakek tua itu.
May limang lalaki na nakaupo at sa itsura nila mukhang mayayamang tao. Pero 'yung dalawa matanda na siguro mga na sa sixty plus at 'yung iba naman ay nasa thirty siguro mahigit, mayroon namang medyo bata pa. Sa itsura nang dalawang matanda mukhang mga manyak kasi kung makatingin sa akin iba. 'Yung bang hinuhubaran ka na sa tingin pa lang.
Both of them instantly took some distance and threw Fuma shuriken at her. Mother pulled out the Fuma shuriken piercing her and threw it to intercept one Fuma shuriken and rushed towards Shizuku.
"Kau kenapa?" Tanya Sehun setelah lama menatapnya. Pria itu heran melihat Yoona yang terus berdiam diri dan tidak sekalipun menoleh kepadanya. Akhirnya Yoona tersadar, lagi dan lagi, ia kembali terpaku ketika mendapatkan sepasang mata sedang menatapnya lekad. "appo?" tanyanya lembut. Sehun terlihat sedang mengkhawatirkannya.
The women still in her tattered state said those words. A grin again appeared on the man's face but it soon vanished into a serious one and he stepped one step ahead disappearing. The women gritted her teeth turned to her back blocking several attacks but was still taking cuts. It seemed that she was being pushed back but she still attacked him when the opportunity arose.
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