My Brother’s Hot Best friend

A really good original novel that you won’t regret giving a read. Writing Quality - Not much to say about this because there are rarely any obvious mistakes I can pickup on.Stability of Updates - There are regular updates (Though, there are never enough chapters when you really enjoy a story).Story Development - I like the current development of the story and you can tell the author is either well read or has done some research into the current specifics of the story. I would like to have a closer look at the actual system and the main uses of it for the MC, because at the moment the most important aspects I can think of are the map and crafting. It feels like he has been neglecting his responsibilities as a Lord in his own territories and I would like to see his making better use and giving a better look into the running of his current lands. With all the statistics available  from the system I would think that he could create some medium long and easy to understand plans?Character Design - The character designs for the people that matter are well thought out. Even some side characters and the general attitudes of the nobles proves enlightening. The only thing that irritates me at times is the Main Character and his many tangents. Though, I suspect that is a design of the author on purpose. It just seems like the MC likes to jump from one thing to the next like an excited child and not being able to wait to show his efforts to all the people (Yet having nothing physical to show for that idea yet)World Background - The general lay of the world is proving to be well written. I’m not particularly well informed on polish geography and what has been established is well done, It would prove useful for the author to at some point once the MC has a stable land ownership to creat a map with the different colour coding to show who owns what (I find it helps with visualisation).Overal, a fantastic piece of work.

all the characters in this fan fiction are just garbage. every woman is just a sh***. the only normal character is mc's father.all the characters in this fan fiction are just garbage. every woman is just a sh***. the only normal character is mc's father.

Not bad, but kinda boring. The MC has yet to encounter any kind of conflict. I mean, there isn't even any face-slapping! The MC "just wants to farm peacefully" and that's exactly what he does.

Author here, this novel is really good! More seriously I got a lot of positive feedback so far so I hope you enjoy the story. Thanks for your support everyone!

VKSS1602 bhai aage badho hum tumhare saath hai!This is in support of the novel. I'll leave another review later 😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜

I was even interested but I don't like mind break and even as a mortal the mc's power still causes it in women.  Anything involving mind manipulation and mind breaking I'm out.

It's really good and,give it a shot and it will definelitely catch your intention.Brion is improving good and the universe is written well.I expect great things from this novel.

The only thing I noticed is the whole shoving three different dialogue into one paragragh. You always start a new paragraph when starting a new dialogue.