My Baby Daddy is My Billionaire CEO

O protagonista é estupido, a namorada dele so serve como distração, o protagonista espera ser profissional em casa no sofa, eu acho que a teg misterio so foi colocada para justificar o baixo QI do protagonista, mas tem uma boa qualidade de atualizações de capítulos

Coolio! This was great, enjoyed the whole thing, couple of mistakes here and there but overall it was clear and easy to follow/understand.

The story is a mess.Rather than having the mc become a low level master black smith and show his importance it broke world building in order in order to show off Chinese weapons.Let me explain:From where I currently left the mc is already 7th grade in terms of power as a martial artist yet still hasn't advanced to low level master blacksmith yet.And oh by the way he became important to the kingdom. An apprentice blacksmith is a slave because mortal weapons are not really useful but for the sake of power fantasy the author made it so that mortal weapons have great importance. The author also made blacksmiths above apprentice almost nonexistent just so the mc has importance, only grandmasters have appeared. In fact the higher weapons are very very rare for some reason.When assassin went to the kingdom to assassinate a high target or targets none of them had a single weapon above mortal. Like excuse me? This isn't the end of the dumbness. For some reason the enemy kingdom just so happen to make a list of all the assassins that are going to kill the targets. Killing these targets would hurt the Xia kingdom. So why would they make a note like that? And why would they entrust that note on some low level martial artists? One of those targets have a very high rank so why? To hide it? Then why would those low ranks have a band of soldiers behind them? Because of that they were discovered. Why? So the mc could do something important even if he is weak. Why would mortal weapons not break or be inefficient against martial artist? So the mc can be important.More importantly so Chinese weapons can be praised. That's right all this world breaking is so the author can praise weapons. At least that is what I think otherwise why would the author do this?

HYPE!! I mean look at that glorious life knowledge cipher pentagram that laid upon secretly on the webnovel cover!! Such an elusive way of painting the canvas future of world abomination that will reign supreme in the universe immortality!!a remade made of the conceptualized jaw drop-BREAKING MASTERPIECE PREMISE THAT SHOULDN'T BE LOOKED DOWN EVER!!

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Alright, so first is writing quality. The writing quality here is just amazing, hundreds of times better than most authors on the site. Just truly commendable.Second is stability of updates. I'm forced to give this a 4 because it is still too early to tell if the author will be updating on a regular schedule or not.Next is story development, which is just a bit too slow for me. I don't really know why, it's just slow in the beginning, but I promise it picks up more, so don't think it's that much of a bad thing.Next is story development, which seems really cliche right now. There isn't anything unique yet, so another 4.Finally, world background. Although the world background is really unique on the platform, I think it still needs to be more unique than some mainstream novels, because it seems like you're just replacing one ring with many rings. I'll be waiting for something unique to happen.Overall, a really good novel, would definitely recommend it casually.

The writing quality is very poor, especially In the beginning, it gets better towards the end, but can still be hard to decipher what they are saying at times. The world building is pretty good and so are the characters. The only reason I kept reading till the end was because I found the concept interesting, especially the blessings, that was fun. The first thing that should be worked on is the writing quality, it is almost near impossible to understand what I am reading at some points and that needs to be worked  on immediately. It was hard to understand what was happening when the mc and his dad first met. I still dont know why he cant be his dads son anymore. That whole part made no sense, also with the mind place with the island and ****. Still don't understand that because it was not explained properly and the writing quality didn't help. Also, the characters emotions and personality change dramatically at times. It's just a real mess to be honest. Cool concept, bad execution.

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