hi author, I want to suggest somethingin the latest chapters, XT has some argument with Teng Qigang, now we all know TQ will contact his boss ( Cao Song). Cao song will find different way to harm / kill XT or XT's loved ones and XT will have to do much things to save them. Author, we all know this kind of story plot and it's toooooo boring 🤧. if it 1,2 times then it's okay but it's not good to keep repeating it. We all readers have read this kind of plot thousands of time. So I want to suggest something.why not make XT kind of Anti-hero / evil mc. He is gang leader, add some detective kind people group for him. who collects all information for him and keep him updated about new rising stars or his competitor in current scenario. so it is kind of information network for XT. Now if you make story like after XT Argus with Teng Qigang. XT will ask his information group to find all details about Teng Qigang, his background and his boss and all thing. XT will plan to destroy Cao Song and Teng Qigang before even they can do anything to XT. this kind of anti-hero feels much better than that boring same hero plot. XT will use this group to find all competitor and destory them before they even know who's is planning in background. please consider this suggestion and see if you can add it in upcoming story plot.😁😁
I’m sorry but I came here expecting something amazing according to the reviews but all I see is TOO MUCH PORN SCENES. Sometimes I forget whether this is a novel or a **** story. It is truest weird to dedicate a few chapters just to describe sexual inter course and it kinda disrupts the reading experience.
Now it may just be me, but I think this story started with good potential... slowly descending into something disappointing.The summary caught my attention, and for a long while, I was one of the ones who cheered whenever I saw a new chapter being released.However, it sort of ended up as the typical story with approximately the same structure as other copy and paste stories with a little tweaks.The MC starts interesting. He has memories or in the case of the story ‘dreams’ of another world, namely ours. His master (the person who raised him) is dead, and there are two people who come to cancel his engagement with this talented girl. He is a doctor and botanist. And because of those foundations and a game like system, he slowly becomes stronger and has the ‘talent’ to become a dream master, the best occupation in the setting... apparently...We see him surpass many people including that girl he was engaged to, becoming a monstrous talent (never before seen), become a pivotal role in a war, and in a few chapters become on par or stronger than the leader he was following during that war.And then we just have him becoming increasingly apathetical. He experiments on his patients to improve and explore his medical skills, kidnaps/locks away people to extract their memories and secrets (with the consequences of fantasy-reality distortion and madness), altering a life’s memories to benefit himself, and just kills whoever pisses him off or blocks his way.The subordinates around him are more or less indebted to him. Zhou Wenwu for guiding him and helping to exact revenge against the person who annihalated his family, the pill maker and his talented adopted sister for taking them out of a complicated situation and basically defending them from thug (ish) people, and a Zhang guy whom previously had conflicts between them, but settled the misunderstanding and got his life saved in the process...In the end, the basic points of the story that got me interested in the first place was covered and rewritten by how the story developed. The initial character building seems to be unimportant or unneeded. And the side characters just seem like ornaments after their backstory is explained.Of course it is still enjoyable to those that liked the above mentioned or are looking for something to fill up time, but honestly, I can’t see how this would turn out other than a OP protagonist with almost ZERO remorse or sense of death. (Especially since he literally trains in his dream, which makes him literally God.)Translation Quality: 5Stability of updates: 5Story development: 2Character design: 2 (was 4)World Background: 3*my English is bad when typing on a phone, plz don’t mind that...
Well its unique way of starting a story, really good in my opinion*Nods* in approvalIt has fast updates, good character developing so far and yeah HAREM, so yeah give it a shot it's definitely worth it.For Man of culture that is
I have read till 60 chps and from what i gathered, the writing style is rather bland. Nothing interesting seems to happen and there is no x factor which makes u binge read a book. Or maybe it is a translation problem. Our mc is reborn in a village and he has 1 year (can be extended) to make a top magical academy or he dies. He is beither too strong or too weak. Just mehh. Personality wise, he is like a lazy dude who just goes through the same itenary everyday. So much so that it has become boring. Wake up- Teach magic to loli - attempt a dungeon -repeat. The writing style is so stupid that it skips the reward part of the dungeon after completion and subtly explains it in later chps. Come on, watching mc get cool rewards is the only reason we go through the dungeon clearing stuff and u gonna skip that?!! In later chps the mc suddenly does a magic or builds a academic building and dumps all its explanation on dungeon rewards. Its so confusing and irritating.His students also look like 1-d characters due to having no pov of thier own. If that's not enough, the mc is a "Good guy" who cant bring himself to kill people and helps people indiscriminately even if that means getting into the cliche troubles knowingly. The world is our typical western fantasy world with elves, trolls, etc. Apparently humans are not the dominant species and are lead by the magicians and the academies. Overall a slow and boring read for me. Maybe it might get better in the latter chps. Give it try. Maybe u might like it. If somebody have read it in mtl, plzz give me a idea of where it goes in latter chps the comments.
A bit of a slow start, but hooks you in once it’s started. Interesting characters with unique personalities, and relationships that make sense. Big fan of the magic system and the world, or what little we know of it. Definitely has potential to be a very good novel with plenty of excitement and thrills
I really love this on-going story so far. It's like riding a roller-coater; full of twists and turns; unexpected death just waiting for our twelve protagonists who were more or less forced to play the death game of some psychotic killer cowardly hiding behind the walls of a supposedly grand hotel situated in a seemingly deserted place, almost like a desert actually. A page-turner and hard to put down because you also take a chance in deciphering the code with the main characters, giving you the feel of being there with them as well, fighting for your very life. I hope the author would update regularly. I really want to know what will happen next. Dying to know who is the killer. I want justice for those who died (and will die) because of the fatal games. No apparent reason. Just plain game of death.
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