Please get picked, sounds like the only interesting one.πππππ ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
First let me say I love the story, if i only liked it id have dropped it. seriously needs an editor. lots of spacing errors that have the correct words but two words end up wrong as a result. Some incorrect words and some words that only make sense if using a thesaurus(those i actually dont mind bc it expands my vocabulary even if i have to look them up). I really like the mc and his OP βI cultivate everythingβ setup. Im interested to see where things go from here (im in the 60s chapter wise currently) To the author let me say good story, keep writing and Iβll keep reading.
This novel is excellentThis is a original novel which is pretty rare as it is.Recommend 100%__________________________________________________________________
An undertale novel that hasn't been dropped on it's head, that's the basic summary of this novel. I hate the word count so much, like, bro, this is a genuine death grudge against a web novel feature. My use of commas are beyond your understanding.
i really enjoying reading ππ this book ,but contains many words of corruption, which is not supposed to be read by under age, it about a story of love from the first sight and I don't know how much to explain this book, a good author with good feature it really interesting,but I don't get the remaining chapter due to insufficient coin
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