This story was perfectly written to bring tears to your eyes. The words convey emotions exactly what the pain of lost love does. Be captivated. Be intrigued and soon fall in love with how this beautiful novel is.
Okay so... I need to read more but so far it is a very rough story. I'm two chapters in and there are already a ridiculous amount issues. Grammer for one, using male pronouns instead of female and confusing the reader is a big one. There are also already some plot issues I see on the horizon. Honestly, I think that the premise is good but it just needs more work and thought. Could also use someone to go through and help with grammar. I will try to continue and may update the review if there is any improvement in quality, character depth, or flow vs forced plot.
Edgy mess that isn't worth anyone's time. Translation is so poor that I have no idea what is going on with a number of important things like what cultivation levels are or how cultivation even works. The MC has no motivation other than to ... be evil? I could go on but it isn't worth my time.
This facking copy/paste of game of throne, whats wrong with you people dont just copy other person work you twat.......................................................................
The first thing they did was apply chakra to their claws to let themselves move quickly, and then they started spinning like a pair of buzz saws, zipping backwards into the army. The clones seemed to be mostly in favor of melee, not a shuriken or kunai among them. But the girl in the red jacket? Hisako, Shizo thought her name was? She had kunai and she probably knew how to throw them. The clones would make for good cover.
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