Woah, what a gem of a find I did not expect to find a well written story, Its already better than 95% of stories just simply because its ' readable' and the plot is well thought out.
Frankly pleasantly surprised.I have read dozens of xianxia and this one is by far in my top 3.It changes a lot compared to other just already by the fact that there are 2 mc. Following the history of the 2 sets is very interesting.Not much to say except go read the story.Author I see you haven't published a chapter for a while on this story... Do you want to abandon this story?
3.4Why do I feel like things are happening for no reason? And why did I even read this? Nothing makes sense anymore. Especially the mothers reaction, and how could mc impregnate his own mother?! From what ik its hard to impregnate close relatives (close as in blood relationships) And mc over here just 1, 2 shots and now, bam. He's got another sibling. All women in this:
was an amazing read so far and I love all the amazing characters. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out. I am excited to keep reading about what happens next
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Reviewing for an event.The writing is not too bad, but there’s too much exposition. The story seems to drag.Take this with a grain of salt, for I read too little of the novel.Well, the narrative is first person, which is uncommon here, and a nice change of pace.Hope the author keeps writing!
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