He should change the name to the sage of cooking because thats seems to be the main topic of this novel atleast in the first 70 chapter that is. There is too much in this novel that doesnt matter ... Im fine with side stories but every chapter feels like one
Don’t know why there is a villain tag but so far the story is great!The dialogue between characters feel realistic and smooth while each character still retains their original personality.The potential is absolutely huge, keep it up!
The storyline intrigued me to read further...The author's writing style is well written and the characters are well portrayed in the story...Highly recommended book...added in my library...Looking forward to reading more chapters...Great Work, Author!
Hi, have the following comments and hence dropping it as it is different than what I initially thought. 1. The MC is shown has smart and cautious character, but he is anything but that. In fact many times, he just acts like a madman and then tries to justify the action through some reasoning. Maybe the author intends it to be this way, but this is not my cup of tea. For instance, he goes way back to the capital to save his friend from people with too high cultivation, when he could have intercepted and saved him whilst he was escorted to the capital. And in the end, the friend dies. .2. The MC is shown to be smart, learned and talented with amazing comprehension. But when he wants to unlock a storage ring which is usually through sense/qi/blood, he goes to a competitor and owes him a favour for telling him to use blood to open the ring. 3. The brotherhood of the MC and dog is very forced. Usually the development of such bond between the characters should be smooth and felt by the readers, but here the author just keeps on harping about friendship every other paragraph for many chapters to come.
Chinese name: 史上第一密探 (First secret agent in history)Status: Finished in 382 chaptersHaven't read it, will wait for Qidian - will they pick it up, or drop it
the story is too slow till now chapters 86?the progress to kill protagonist is just barely there and this is like multi jump world type thing and he still barely making progress in his 1st world, and I didn't even like the protagonist,
it's great, just some grammar problems I would genuinely fix his grammar for free. seriously, this Nivel has much potential, and writing quality is quite important. ok that's all I have to say
I really loved reading the novel; even if I think the narrative is a bit too fast-paced for me and writing quality may need a little improvement, I'm not complaining since, in my opinion, it's still worth reading because of its capacity to keep the readers excited for the next event throughout the chapters and the characters chemistry.
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