MINDKILL

A question a lot of people ask everywhere, NO HAREM.Im surprised this novel is not more popular. I saw a lot of reviews from like first 20 chapters complaining, dont know why bother writing a review if you read the first page of a book.Writing quality is solid, maybe a typo once a few chapters if even that. Vocabulary usage is varied which was nice.Dont know much about updates since i got the novel when it was finished so just 5/5 i guess. Barely any bloat or padding anywhere, which is really rare for a system novel.Story developed in a good pace, slower at start where smallest things had chapters, to mid point where repetitive fights started to get summarized, and at the end solo trainings were summarized.Characters were designed well, characters grew, including side characters. Characteristics were reasonable and made sense. Story didnt focus too much on side characters, but enough to get a feeling they existed and were more than 1 dimensional things.World background seemed solid, only thing i didnt like was bunch of references to the odyssey of a blind god or whatever dude who appeared a few times, so not giving a full score. It is a neat idea to intertwine novels, just not for me personally.I'd like to give 4.9, but it is what it is. I do Recommend if a novel with a lighter flavored system is there, No harem, no padding and overall good stuff.

........................................ kinda bad

Made by the famous author  I Fix Air-Conditioner.My house of horror. The Ultimate horror story.House filled with air conditioners.180 is so cool

The mc is absolute garbage he is average of the average so much so it's painful to read. Nothing remarkable nothing special nothing note worthy. Picture a day in the life of an average guy that's all this is but somehow this average person just gets lucky and hasn't died. He gets pushed around alot and smacked regularly he's pretty much a joke at best. Also the cultivation is just trash as well consume pills that's pretty much it. He has no set path and is just a random assortment of broken things he finds laying around sigh. It's just one big mess.

Let's address the elephant in the room. The beginning is VERY similar to The Beginning After The End. That being said this book is very good, and it's characters are definitely different to TBATE.As far as this book goes... it's amazing. I won't go into to many details to avoid spoilers, but, unlike some books where one or two extras are sacrificed every now and then in the name of "character growth

it's fun to read, it doesn't feel rushed, the translation is good, the main character isn't boring or beta.  in general it's a good fanfic, I'm just afraid of the frequency of posting the chapters.

Stopped after 10 chapters, way too much misplaced comedy and incoherences, that pulled me out of the story.There's only 1200 pioneers in the world which I assume has a 7 billion population which makes the chance of being one 1 out of 6 million and of course there's 4 of them being in the same school.It's also not explained why monsters would appear before the terraformation, whether they'd appear for everyone,...After getting these powers and the terraformation, you really get the feeling these guys are in a summer camp. Millions of people may die but all they think above is mocking each others and playing jokes.There's also the convenient fact that you have 2 sons of mma champions, a champion archer and a kid from an assassin family all in the same school...Too much for me to believe it'd be genuinely possible if such event were to be happening. It's a sloppy beginning.

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