Memoirs of the Returnee

The premise of the story is highly incongruous, as the characters possess modern conveniences like smartphones, cameras, and the internet, yet they live in a world without firearms and still adhere to an aristocratic system with knights. This imbalance in technology and societal norms creates confusion. The main character's (MC) power level is unclear, as he seems弱小 at times but sporadically showcases strength, leaving readers unsure.

The narrative flow is uneven, particularly during the academy segment. The repetitive assignments and reliance on the MC's unique ability to complete them make for a tedious and unengaging storyline. The academy arc fails to provide a compelling progression or coherent development.

This is an enjoyable read. The main character (MC) and heroines are likable, but there's a lack of a compelling antagonist, which is common in this genre. The story revolves around the MC's journey after regression, with the first 100 chapters focusing on their experiences. As a result, supporting characters don't get as much depth due to the MC-centric narrative.

Many readers might initially perceive the characters as shallow, like Elise, my favorite heroine, whose motivations are unclear early on. However, the author gradually adds depth and dialogue, turning initial dislike into affection. It's surprising how such a shift can occur.

Overall, I'd rate this book 8 out of 10 and would definitely recommend it. The story is accessible, allowing readers to relax and enjoy without requiring extensive comprehension skills.

Original Rating (3.8/5):

<p>The novel initially received mixed feedback (2.5/5) with my expectations being conflicted. Despite my desire to appreciate it, the inconsistent character development is challenging to overlook. I'm continuing to read, but it's safe to say the story only deteriorates as one delves deeper. So far, I'm quite disappointed.</p>

<p>Despite the rocky beginning, I must mention my admiration for Jee Gab Song. His growth from "Monster" onwards is evident, and I genuinely enjoy the novel thus far. In brief, the protagonist, after dying and returning from the future with an enhanced 'Notepad' powered by Libra's Peronium, chooses to pursue a different path in life by attending college. The narrative revolves around his struggles in a competitive and hostile environment, dealing with classism and enmity from key characters.</p>

<p>The story gains traction around chapter 40, but the weak start is a drawback. The awkward conversation between the main character and his killer, as well as the underwhelming introduction of supporting characters like Elise, are apparent issues. Initially, her character was described vaguely by another character, leaving readers uncertain about her feelings towards the protagonist. Early interactions between them leave her feeling detached and underdeveloped, with limited dialogue in the first few chapters.</p>

<p>Fortunately, as the story progresses, these issues begin to improve. Song's typical pattern of a slow start is compensated for by a more fleshed-out plot later on.</p>

This is truly a delightful change of pace. The main character is likable, intelligent, and proactive, which I appreciate. The supporting characters are also well-developed, adding depth to the story. The portrayal of magic and swordplay stands out, as it takes on a significant role and the system feels innovative and well-crafted. The unique blend of modern and fantasy elements in the setting keeps me intrigued. Although there are occasional moments of cheese in the writing, the strong characters and enchanting magical aspects more than make up for it, making the overall experience enjoyable.

Honestly yes, but, the first arc of Shadow Slave gave me enough goosebumps to be a forever dickrider of a possible one hit wonder author.

We will just have to see how it turns out in the future...

That PTSD is hitting hard bro.

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We wanna knowww

No. You don't. This site is keeping up with the translator releases. Only a bit late. And, it takes time to translate after the author took a break. I don't want the rank here to fall instead of rising again...

Fellow daoist, this junior humbly requests for your guidance

Are you guys waiting for my birthday or something?!?! Where are the new chapters!!