Memoirs of the Returnee

I'm fairly caught up with MTL and DAMM, and I can already see the trainwreck Gab Song is heading towards. Surprisingly, I actually respect that he's not dragging in excessive drama until much later, which is typical for him. The main character isn't as alpha as the one in 'Villain Wants to Live'; he's more like the protagonist from 'Novels Extra.' That's a bit frustrating since I hoped for a smarter MC, but oh well.

In terms of powers, the MC is certainly overpowered compared to 'Novels Extra' and 'Villain Wants to Live,' and I actually appreciate that change. Gab Song often claims his MCs are weak, but they always become strong when needed, which feels somewhat contrived. I prefer his current approach where the OP-ness is justified by the MC making the most of their abilities, rather than plot convenience.

Regarding the heroines, it's clear that Gab Song is setting up some dramatic situations, and he's not trying to hide it. In fact, there are subtle hints about his harem from the very beginning. While the drama can be exhausting and annoying, that's actually why I enjoy reading his work – the anticipation of the trainwreck. However, I've been let down before, so I'm tempering my expectations.

At chapter 108, not much has happened, but I'm hopeful that the story will have a satisfying conclusion despite the slow start.

For those accustomed to the fast-paced nature of typical light novels or web fiction, this particular work might feel sluggish or lacking in substantial plot progression. The author devotes ample time to character development, world-building, conflict setup, and even mundane activities like chopping wood. Conflict resolutions, while present, may seem underwhelming or delayed.

Typically, such novels are likened to quick snacks, providing instant gratification, but this one offers a more intricate, detailed narrative that resembles a multi-course meal. Despite being nearly 37 chapters in, the perceived progress has been limited due to its heavy focus on groundwork and nuance. The main character's power dynamics are not immediately evident, which might appeal to readers seeking a more grounded, non-overpowered protagonist.

However, if you prefer a slower pace, detest overpowered protagonists, and have the patience to appreciate a well-constructed narrative, then this story could indeed be enjoyable for you.

Although this novel isn't perfect, a poorly developed main character or convoluted plot isn't its downfall. It stands out with a unique approach to revenge, focusing on transformation rather than gratuitous violence. The protagonist exhibits extraordinary manipulation skills, strategizing on a level beyond his peers, like a masterful puppeteer. The only issue I encountered is that the narrative flow occasionally disrupts due to unexpected plot twists, where characters find themselves in imminent danger without prior warning. These surprises, while explained later, momentarily break the seamless storytelling.

The novel is poorly executed, attempting to be a cultivation story but lacking creativity. The protagonist is portrayed as a typical "young master" character, and the portrayal of women comes across as manipulative and unappealing, almost resembling a vindictive version of the incel ideology. The main character's lack of depth is frustrating, as if the author intentionally mirrors the reader's disdain, which is ironic given the MC's unlikable traits.

My disapproval stems primarily from the predictable nature of the female characters turning out to be love interests. It's like the author is saying, "She wronged you, tormented you, and now you'll just sweep her off her feet." It's a disappointing and shallow narrative choice. ????

In essence, the book fails to engage due to its clichéd plot and one-dimensional characters.

This appears to be a review praising Jee Gab Song's masterpiece, with the reviewer highlighting the unique setting and engaging plot of a particular novel. They mention that the story improves upon the author's previous works, with well-developed characters, a distinct plot, and a consistent world-building. The reviewer addresses common criticisms, such as the protagonist being perceived as weak or the world not being logical, by arguing that these are subjective opinions or misunderstandings.

The protagonist, Shion, is described as a likable character who evolves throughout the story, and the mystical world is appreciated for maintaining its own rules and mystery. The pace is acknowledged to be dense rather than slow, and the "slice of life" aspect is seen as a strength, providing a balance of tension and relaxation. The "Notepad" ability is recognized as a flexible power that adds趣味性 but may not appeal to those seeking strict rules.

Characters, including the female leads, are praised for their depth and growth, with Elise's transformation particularly noteworthy. The reviewer also points out that the novel surprisingly resolves a potential misunderstanding quickly, which is atypical for the author's style.

In conclusion, the reviewer believes the current rating does not accurately represent the quality and enjoyable nature of the story, recommending it highly.

This author's latest work bears a striking resemblance to their previous ones, so fans who enjoyed those will likely appreciate this one as well. Familiar tropes recur, such as intense love-hate dynamics riddled with misunderstandings, the protagonist leveraging their skills to excel in art or craftsmanship, convoluted time-traveling shenanigans involving alternate dimensions, and even a recycled prison name from an earlier web novel.

Despite the apparent repetition found in the author's storytelling style similar to Toika's novels, I can't help but devour each installment eagerly.

The narrative is enjoyable and entertaining, much like the author's other works. However, I deducted a star due to a flaw I noticed. The main character (MC) seems overly passive, often being belittled without fault, which can be frustrating at times. What truly irks me is that despite this treatment, the MC repeatedly risks everything to save those who mistreat him. It's hard to relate when someone continually insults and provokes bullying, and I personally wouldn't extend a helping hand.

The scene where the MC, who has a deep-seated hatred towards a girl who caused their mother's death and has shown no gratitude, wants to rescue her from a dangerous situation, just doesn't sit right with me. "No way, pal. That's not how I'd handle it," I can't help but think.

The novel initially starts strong and captures interest, but its sluggish pacing becomes a hindrance. The plot jumps between multiple subplots, which results in uneven character development. For instance, Libra, who should be a central figure based on the MC's target, receives disappointingly minimal screen time, even up to Chapter 173 where I'm currently reading. There's almost no information provided about Libra or their background characters, and the focus on academy life and its events starts to feel repetitive rather than advancing the overall story. As an "ACTION" novel, it lacks depth in describing fights; battles tend to be brief, with extended planning and dialogue often taking center stage during what should be action sequences.

If you have time to read, consider giving this a try. The novel shines in its dramatic elements, particularly the interactions between the female characters and the protagonist. However, the villainous presence lacks depth – there's no strong antagonist to create tension.

The plot can be convoluted and difficult to follow, making it hard to summarize the overall arc. My usual gauge for character development would be the proximity between the main female leads and the protagonist. So, if you enjoy romantic dramas over action-packed battles, this might be your cup of tea. In fact, it could offer an engaging slice-of-life experience.

It's remarkable how the author managed to create a scenario where there's no likable character by Chapter 70; I must admit, I'm quite impressed despite the MC's inconsistency. He comes across as entitled, not particularly smart yet thinks highly of himself, claims to have high morals but has worked for both Libra and the underground, making him hypocritical. He's a self-righteous, talentless individual with an inflated sense of self-importance who doesn't put in the effort. Oh, and did I mention he has a secret condition, cancer, which he can't even muster the energy to acknowledge – spoiler alert! The majority of the significant characters are women with off-putting personalities, leaving me frustrated enough to want to physically confront them. The interactions between characters are either strained or lack authenticity, and they struggle to form genuine connections. The overall atmosphere of the novel feels suffocating and frustrating due to the slow pacing, which quickly becomes annoying. Despite the writing and translation being commendable, the story's quality suffers from these issues.