Love this series! Just saw the new cover art, I really like it! You do a great job developing the word around Hera, It’s nice seeing the culture per say of the dungeon world. It’s a bit slow going in the actual plot, but that is picking up and I’m excited for them to get into the maze!
I do hope everyone can enjoy this novel. Our MC will spend a lot of time on her own exploring and discovering things inside the MAZE.
The idea is to mix some regular fantasy troupes with some slice of life, showing how is to actually live as someone who fights monsters and explore different places for a living.
One of the rare books on Webnovel that is actually well written, has a plot, and characters with depth.
The world is interesting and unique enough to not follow the standard trope of System integration into the world.
The MC is relatable and human with foibles, desires, and fears that make her relatable. She has a dimensionality to her that most OP characters in webnovel's lack.
I think this is a must read for anyone that enjoys System type novels.
5 stars . The storyline is good, the characters have depth, the main character is definitely no hero type, not everything goes out for her but she's not the smartest, not the strongest, feels really natural.
So far even with the small amount of chapters I am really enjoying this. It may seem similar to other system novels, but with the way it is going it feels more... fresh than other novels I've read. I can not wait to see where it goes.
I have to say that this world the author has created is really, really interesting. It's the type of story that makes me want to see it in the visual medium. Always while reading a chapter I am trying to visualize everything. And to be able to make the reader want to visualize is the proof of how invested they have become in your story.
Hera, in the first six chapters, has been very well written out and set up for further character development. Few people characterize their MCs in the first few chapters and many who try to do it are not able to very well. This is one of the rare examples of stories where it is done well and that just adds so much more to this story.
For a book that is more about world-building (at least that's what I understand from the description), you have created an excellent stage to further write.
A very solid read that I'd recommend people who like world-building to definitely try. Good work, Author!
The writing us phenomenal but still need work on grammar and punctuation. Overall, the plot is well written and guides the readers to its intended outcome. I've read some novels with the similar premise, but they were poorly written.
How do you feel writing a story that captivates my eye?
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I do hope everyone can enjoy this novel. Our MC will spend a lot of time on her own exploring and discovering things inside the MAZE.
The idea is to mix some regular fantasy troupes with some slice of life, showing how is to actually live as someone who fights monsters and explore different places for a living.
The world is interesting and unique enough to not follow the standard trope of System integration into the world.
The MC is relatable and human with foibles, desires, and fears that make her relatable. She has a dimensionality to her that most OP characters in webnovel's lack.
I think this is a must read for anyone that enjoys System type novels.
Hera, in the first six chapters, has been very well written out and set up for further character development. Few people characterize their MCs in the first few chapters and many who try to do it are not able to very well. This is one of the rare examples of stories where it is done well and that just adds so much more to this story.
For a book that is more about world-building (at least that's what I understand from the description), you have created an excellent stage to further write.
A very solid read that I'd recommend people who like world-building to definitely try. Good work, Author!
How do you feel writing a story that captivates my eye?