Mated To The Son Of The Devil

I like the story, the plots not really unique but its entertaining to read. My one issue with this novel is, well, the romance aspect of it. I don't care if the MC is deranged or a lunatic, however it doesn't make any sense why its in the plot. Where exactly does MC even find time for a romance is the grand scheme of things?!?!?It's so unrealistic and contradictory to how you established character... how exactly does romance fit into a novel where the protag is motivated by ambition to overcome the laws of the world in the novel?He wants powers, he actively strives for it and disregards the life of others like insects to achieve what he wants.... and now your trying to make me believe he can suddenly love after all that he's done and willing to do?It's ridiculous. You don't establish the essence of your character as ruthless and power hungry, devoid of feeling and morality, only seeking power, to add in a romance in the middle of the novel....You might ask why you shouldn't do this? Easy! Because someone willing to do anything for power would NEVER LOVE ANYONE that would become a HUGE weakness. It contradicts your plot and established MC's sense of self/motivations/goals that the author wrote HIMSELF.You could see from the earlier chapters of this novel that the author kept trying to find ways to make a romance happen, inserting the obvious FL every chance he got and it only got worse, especially at around chapter(s) 592+ onwards. It would have been all great except how the MC progressed many many chapters earlier. We know that he's a psychopath, and he lacks any feelings. By the time the romance (AKA lovesick desperate author wants some MEOWWW) comes in, its not only unbelievable, it's an insult to readers intelligence and time spent reading.

Trash novel. Tyranny of Steel was somewhat of a better novel. But here the MC is just plain stupid. Despite calling himself the greatest General, he has the smarts of a 3-year-old kid with a brain the size of a pea. He can't even blatantly see how others treat his slave. Serving an incompetent Emperor, and he justifies it with being loyal to the country. If he was loyal to the country and its people, the first this he would do would be to kill that Emperor.He does so much for the country and then gets flogged through the streets naked. And still remains loyal. Lol sure. Instead of being realistic and practical, Go live in your wish fulfillment, would be believed world Author

ugh there is too much bs in this novel. mc keep saying that want to live safe and peaceful life and then focus only on defense that much that he unable to run when in dangers or opportunities but he does otherwise he keep courting death going to more and more dangerous situations even though he had another many safe options. and then mc will keep ranting about how is being troubled with others messing with him even though he is the one who is responsible for the situation. all in all this a typical novel filled with bs and hypocrisy.

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I don't know how the author does it, but with every passing chapter the story gets better and better. I know a bit more about the story than the crowd here as I'm a beta reader. Still I can't wait for y'all to see what happens in the future.

Another great story I found!This one has so much potential, to be honest. This is a diamond on the rough. I enjoyed my time reading chapter by chapter.The weaving of the plot and story-telling were intricate and really entertaining. Though I wish that the Author would give more effort in describing the surroundings or give us more detailed visualization of the background. This is in order to give us more glimpse to the world that the Author created for the readers.So far, in totality, it is 9.9/10.Must-Read!

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