that the synopsis does not deceive you, the novel starts great, and develops quite well, the beginning was at least curious, but original xd, and the lemon is quite good
I wish I had found this book once its finished, I hate wating and building expectations of extraordinary stories Iike, This is a excellent story that I cant wait to see it to it’s conclusion.
I have only read 31 chapters right now.Writing quality is a 4 for meUpdate stability a 5 for one chap per dayFor me, the synopsis does help with future events but the problem here is that the synopsis spoils too much of what happens. The author could just say she and not mention who those people are. Why? Because there are characters that fit the description of the lady and they are not even a player. Just from the 31 chapters I read, some groups fit the description of the betrayal (the black wings who torture him)and if the synopsis was vague on what group is going to betray him then it can create suspense. 5 for how the story is developing but 1 for the synopsis. And for me the synopsis affects the story development so it is a 3 star for Story Development.I like the characters except for the black wings for me they are annoying. I don't get why there are people who hate the mc at the start(tbh the guy who rated this story 5 stars was the one whi complained) since it is reasonable he acts that way. Although he was, personally for me, too slow. So 3 starsI like how they don't give too much of the background at the start(looks at stuck as a dungeon mob who dedicated the entire 3rd chapter for world-building in the perspective of a guy who dies in chapter 5). For me 5 stars
nice story and sweet character ...I really like those little interaction between Jiang Ru yi and xia lei... please keep continuing the story author ...we all love it...
This book is so trash that even among the trashes it comes at the bottom.Names keep changing every now and then and new people's names keep introduced without even telling who they are.This is a new level trashiness and to think webnovel allowed this,really the standards of webnovel kepp dropping further and further.And don't even get me started on the story or character of MC.He does so many brainless things that I believe even a new born baby's decision-making and intelligence would be better than the MC.This book has made me so frustrated that I would like the author to take a printout of your book and choke on it.
I needed to read a wish fulfillment novel to take a bad taste from a previous novel that I just read. I didn't expect a decent plot and some comedy as well...this novel only has a few chapters but so far I'm enjoying it.
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