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tbh this story had potential but the author doesn't utilise it.the characters are good but again author doesn't know to utilise it.author doesn't even know what to do with this story, it's not slice of life or anything. it's just boring and the story goes NO WHERE. overall please don't pick this up thinking it is good like me, I have suffered from this story.
Chapter 30, i can't take anymore.The biggest problem here theres no space of every conversation. Just imagine the the whole parangraph and the author included the conversation of every characters, how long is that when you reading it?
Alright, I read up to give chapters and I somewhat enjoyed reading it. The premise of taking everything online was what captured my attention the most. the writing quality is good, could be better but it's much better than mine (kek) the characters are somewhat likable and the world background is good as well as the story development so far. keep it up and all the best for WSA 2022.
This is basically a continuation of the translation from where the last translator left off. Please don't expect regular uploads as I will do so when I have the time and mood to do so.
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