Mandar - to reach heaven

  That made me more anxiety to go back and check for it. The only thing I can recall is hairs. That feel looks so different and the first thing I felt in the astral world.

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I love the novel so far and i’m on almost chapter 300 but I went ahead and checked the next chapter names and I don’t know how to feel about having almost 300 chapters worth of Daimon being in a prison dimension away from the main setting of the story, I feel like it’s way too many chapters for a magic ruin exploration. Just my opinion though, keep up the good work :)

Author here! I am enjoying writing this story, but I can see why some might not like all the abuse the mc takes at the start, but that changes over time. Still, I think that this book will make you laugh, and put you on the edge of your seat at time! Please at least enjoy the free chapters before making any judgements!

A solid novel with well-crafted descriptions and a good sense of realism. The attention to detail adds depth to the scenes, making them engaging. Keep up the good work—though there is still room for improvement