Malin's Poem

This is suprising, i read this novel first 30 chapter one month ago and now it is in voting poll.Ydfuguvuuvuucucyctydzyffuxugxguxfzufxigfzufxigcigxicix

the lack of editing in this novel is disappointing.was such a niche genre. had all the potentials to be a gem but been riddled with the mass of people who likes to give opinions about mc all around him. a mashup of, young master cliches Mommy lying trough (whatever it means) the monsters are actually the most interesting part of this novel and make it unique among others. if it just cuts up the excess waste of fillers of every non-named NPC talks, it would have been a much better novel.I'll skim around for a few more to find that interesting part alone.

I actually found this novel good and I've also read this fourth times at other website. Oh yeah the original translator of this novel is at noodletowntranslateddotcom, if you want to support them then go.(I've copied this review somewhere and it's a bit helpful and this is not really from the latest chap right now because it's been two months I think when the review has been made)~Done reading to the latest and I just want to give my own short evaluation in this novel, so if you're interested in this one then read.When I first read this novel, there's a harem tag, but now there's only romance and idk why and it's good too, because harem may ruin the story(well it depends to how it goes).Now about the misleading summary, at first I thought this would be a novel where flirting is a must(because there's a harem tag back then) but now I'd say that this isn't.I don't want to spoil much because the story is really good, and saying something may ruin the other readers, so just keep up with this vagued evaluation.Let's talk about the story.This novel isn't really confusing unliked other ones where they forgot some things, because in this novel, there's a clear goal and they explained it well(that made this novel worthy to read).About the mc, it's only explained that he's getting stronger and there's no clear explanation of how strong he really is. The focus of the story is on mc's adventure and there's not much of training explained other than where it is required. Well, you won't really discover it if you don't notice it firsthand when reading because they dodge that thing really well! Just take it as MC is doing some training because he really does at the early chapters and maybe they didn't focus on that much for the sake of plot. Also the MC is getting stronger everytime that his ability enhanced on its own.(That's the only explanation I have other than training)About the mc's romance, well well, it's worth waiting until it gets clear. The romance in this story is really good and the way he fight for it is exceptional as well. It just hurt a bit when the mc's pair said "then let's continue being brother and sister" or something along that line, it really hit me hard! (They aren't blood related!).Maybe this kind of evaluation is enough, because I don't really want to say some heavy spoilershit. I just think that this is what the other wants to know and that's why I'll stop at this.Well, enjoy reading. It's worth your time~ That's it, for me tho I sometimes wish for this novel to be a harem because it really hurts for the other girl when the MC met her again and received help from MC for some time.(I think it's at near chap 500 for that)

There are little to none grammatical errors, the story devolpment is really interesting and novel, the charachet design is well made and the characters aren't 2d, What can i say? I only wish to see more chapters!

I enjoyed the beginning, but when it goes premium after 7 chapters. Kind of puts a dampening on wanting to read the whole thing. I'm an advocate for paying for chapters because I believe the authors deserve recognition.

To be honest, I'm not a fan of game stuff but this exceeds my expectations. I'm glad that I was able to find thia novel over thousand books here.Good job author

the story is nice just some uncomfortable scene and my heart ache every now and then also i don't like having the main girl not a virgin just my opinion though maybe just the influence of betrayal part that's why i don't like the mc having a girl who already experience the forbidden fruit of love making so maybe if you add some potential wifu candidate and a virgin at that(my bias) my heart might finally come in peace and remove the pain that plaguing my heart

It is pretty good,the grammar isn't the best but I just try to over look that and when I do you story is pretty good,the characters are alright and the MC has a good personality. MC is a little stupid at times but that is bound to happen because he is just a kid. All and all not to bad of a story.