Make India Great Again

Chapter 139:"It was like a rape case in which the victim struggled desperately but was still stript of her clothes; as she was ready to close her eyes in enjoyment"That quote alone should tell you all you need to know about this book.

At lumapit naman ang binata sa dalaga at iniabot ang isang pumpon ng bulaklak ng mga rosas. Bagama't nahihiya man ang dalaga ay tinanggap niya ito at nagpasalamat sa binata.

We became fast friends each of us doing our duties under our teachers. Sometimes for combat training, we would work together under General Durage.

Everytime that I am going to speak up  , something is bothering me . I really  can't , I don't even have the strength . She is walking so fast that I wasn't able to get close on her and talked to her.  

Souma was silenced. And after thinking a while, he let out a long sigh.

I said yep what a concept

Jerry and Arlene decided to open a café that specializes in ube flavored pastries. Jerry told to Arlene that the ube from Philippines is very famous in their country. Arlene suggested that they open a café and she'll bake treats with ube on it. Those were recipes that she learned from her mother before she moved there from Philippines…  

Here are my honest thoughts based on what I read so far and I am sorry if it's offended you:World Building: I do like the world-building in this novel because first, it's quite interesting with the superpower people reigning the whole city and becoming a corrupt monster at hierarchy. The atmosphere and the situation of the world was pretty fine. However, this is my personal preference in honesty, I suggested for you to give more description about the environment. So, it can make the world clearer and easier to imagine.Characters: The characters so far it's quite decent. The main character is getting some vibe of the underdog and I do really like his struggle always being pushed than when in the critical decision, he decided to fight back. I also like the main character is quite a nice guy as he helped other too. However, there is some problem of how he got his power, it felt quite random when he got the wind power.  The foreshadowing of obtaining in the early chapter wasn't enough and it felt he just randomly being blessed.  Therefore, there is an easy way to fix it which is I think you expand and give more about his reaction to getting the power.As for the side characters, so far they are all fine especially with Haley. I knew she was meant to portray like that and the execution-wise is okay for now. Hence, Haley can have an interesting development in the future.Writing: The writing may had some Capital errors, but it's didn't disturb the flow since it's an easy problem solve. I meant you can just recheck. However this is my gripe about the writing, the backstory appearing in the introduction. I knew you want to make the people know about the character, but describing more about their body language, reaction, and even the way they talk in dialogue can make the character more engaging. Backstory is fine in my opinion, but I suggested not in the same chapter of their introduction. So it can give readers and me personally more time know them as a person especially you can expand the interaction or the body language when sees something happening.Overall: It's pretty nice book and have a quite clear direction where this is going.  I am going to say sorry again if my critic  was quite harsh and it's okay for you to disagree. Therefore, keep up the good work and good luck.

Your novel has a great start, it also has a strong emotional depth and an engaging premise. Overall, it's a promising concept and has the potential to be a gripping romance if it carefully balances character depth, suspense, and emotional stakes. Keep up, the wonderful work, author!

I really like this novel however my biggest fault isn’t with the novel but the length of the chapters. The chapters are too short. Sure 22ch a week sounds good but no when everything in those chapters could fit into 10 longer chapters. Like seriously paying for this feels so unsatisfactory. Every other chapter feels like a waste of money. Author please make the chapters longer. We don’t want 22 short ch a week. Rather read 10 chapters where it feels like I’m getting my money worth. I read the whole 102 chapters in 5 hours. Normally in 5 hours of other books I get through 40 chapters maximum. This novel is really good, and you know fans of successful novels like reverend insanity and WOTMW will enjoy this book. The only thing stopping it from reaching those levels is the length of the chapters. Thank you author I hope you never stop writing this novel as I’m genuinely excited for updates to a novel in a long time :)

This looks like a great story, the story is also very interesting, steampunk, magic of the four seasons, really impressive and unforgettable, I hope it can be updated soon, and keep the update stable, I will be your fan